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Butterfly Will Soon Fly

Your face with all its grace waits for my lips, eyes closed,time slows for a longer kiss. Let the lips,only sip nectar of love, tender touch,slight munch capture silky curves. Our tongues sing the songs finger only speak, embarrassed,a beauty spot plays hide and seek. Remember, the sunflowers waiting for the bloom, butterfly will soon fly well over the moon! © kashinath karmakar ==================== By:kashinath karmakar (19th March 2011)

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 4:39:00 AM

Awesome Kashinath.. is this one for Debbie's Internal Rhyme contest? it is super terrifice luv.. good luck .. luv these kisses flowing on Soup.. happy Sunday luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/19/2011 10:36:00 PM

hmmmm, a delicious treat , kasi.. is this for a contest?? come visit my "lips in springtime ." so many tourneys gping on about love!! miss ya, frined!! winning's best..:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2011 9:06:00 PM

wow, this is great, Kash. It's very sensuous as Dr. Ram says here too. I especially like that little part about the beauty spot playing hide and seek (that is popular to wear a beauty mark in India, right?) And the last stanza is a real cute ending! I do not even know what contest this would be for. I have to get offline now but will come back here later and try to get back into the swing of things! luv, andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2011 9:06:00 PM

OH, YES< I remember now. Internal rhyme contest, that's it!! YES YES, this does very nicely for it!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2011 7:09:00 PM

very sensual and refreshing kiss of spring, kashinath