Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Alexandrine

Revisited Respired: 2023 October 12

 

*5th Place*
EIDOLON - the Halloween edition
Contest Judged: 2023 November 06
Sponsored by: Suzette Richards

 

Image: Weight Class Division Chart by Ruliweb.com

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Butterfly Sting Anew

Cold feet weigh the bantam kid whose ears seized phantom wail risk-taker jargon of win-or-lose bargain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 9, 2023 at 2:42 AM
Oh this flows so brilliantly, a wonderful take for the contest, heartiest congratulations to you :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Aloha, Hiya! Thank you kindly for your thought-filled sharing and welcoming visit, my friend! Mahalo, William
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 8:34 AM
William,congratulations on your win
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Ah, you're awesome, Eve! Aloha, William
Fowler Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 7:15 AM
I love the wailing of your jargon dear William. So pleased with your win! Congratulations! :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 7:27 AM
I am very grateful, Linda! You are a blessing, my friend! Aloha, William
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Great inner rhymes for this form. Good luck in the contest
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Thank you, Andrea, as it means a lot to me! Aloha, William
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