Butterfly Sting Anew

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Poetic Form: Alexandrine

Revisited Respired: 2023 October 12

*5th Place*
EIDOLON - the Halloween edition
Contest Judged: 2023 November 06
Sponsored by: Suzette Richards

Image: Weight Class Division Chart by Ruliweb.com

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Cold feet weigh the bantam kid whose ears seized phantom wail risk-taker jargon of win-or-lose bargain.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/9/2023 2:42:00 AM

Oh this flows so brilliantly, a wonderful take for the contest, heartiest congratulations to you :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/9/2023 6:08:00 AM

Aloha, Hiya! Thank you kindly for your thought-filled sharing and welcoming visit, my friend! Mahalo, William

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2023 8:34:00 AM

William,congratulations on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/6/2023 8:57:00 AM

Ah, you're awesome, Eve! Aloha, William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/6/2023 7:15:00 AM

I love the wailing of your jargon dear William. So pleased with your win! Congratulations! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/6/2023 7:27:00 AM

I am very grateful, Linda! You are a blessing, my friend! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2023 1:17:00 PM

Great inner rhymes for this form. Good luck in the contest

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/23/2023 3:08:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, as it means a lot to me! Aloha, William