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Butterfly of Night

Dancing in the air, Rejoicing the warmth of light; Flapping wings of grace.

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Jared Pickett

Date: 8/1/2009 9:51:00 PM

Portrays the effect of the butterfly well....You are one of my favorite poets on this site which is why I choose you for **The Limerick Game** .....................AWESOME......:JP]

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/25/2009 9:35:00 AM

this is such a lovely haiku and encapsulates the beauty of the butterfly...thanks again so much for the honors in your haiku contest :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/21/2009 5:48:00 AM

Raul, I was worried for a second, I didn't see a poem of yours right away! I gotta settle down! nice poem! jim

John Freeman

Date: 7/19/2009 5:24:00 PM

Amazing, how a butterfly moves, God bless,Moses Congratulations on freatured poem!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/19/2009 4:07:00 AM

Raul, Free as a butterfly on the warm summer's sun. What a wonderful way to feel. Very nice haiku. Lovingly, Dane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2009 8:10:00 PM

Lovely image, Raul. Butterlies are one of God's most beautiful creations. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/17/2009 6:03:00 PM

I am a big butterfly fan.Dont see as many as we used to unfortunately. this is a wonderful image..BG

Date: 7/17/2009 12:57:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting view. Love the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 7/17/2009 12:18:00 PM

Delightful imagery Raul>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2009 2:50:00 AM

Beautifully written. Sara