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Butterfly of Night

Dancing in the air, Rejoicing the warmth of light; Flapping wings of grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/1/2009 9:51:00 PM
Portrays the effect of the butterfly well....You are one of my favorite poets on this site which is why I choose you for **The Limerick Game** .....................AWESOME......:JP]
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Date: 7/25/2009 9:35:00 AM
this is such a lovely haiku and encapsulates the beauty of the butterfly...thanks again so much for the honors in your haiku contest :)
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Date: 7/21/2009 5:48:00 AM
Raul, I was worried for a second, I didn't see a poem of yours right away! I gotta settle down! nice poem! jim
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Date: 7/19/2009 5:24:00 PM
Amazing, how a butterfly moves, God bless,Moses Congratulations on freatured poem!
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Date: 7/19/2009 4:07:00 AM
Raul, Free as a butterfly on the warm summer's sun. What a wonderful way to feel. Very nice haiku. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 7/17/2009 8:10:00 PM
Lovely image, Raul. Butterlies are one of God's most beautiful creations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2009 6:03:00 PM
I am a big butterfly fan.Dont see as many as we used to unfortunately. this is a wonderful image..BG
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Date: 7/17/2009 12:57:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting view. Love the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 7/17/2009 12:18:00 PM
Delightful imagery Raul>>James
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Date: 7/17/2009 2:50:00 AM
Beautifully written. Sara
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