Butterfly of Night

Dancing in the air,
Rejoicing the warmth of light;
Flapping wings of grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 9:51 PM
Portrays the effect of the butterfly well....You are one of my favorite poets on this site which is why I choose you for **The Limerick Game** .....................AWESOME......:JP]
K. Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 9:35 AM
this is such a lovely haiku and encapsulates the beauty of the butterfly...thanks again so much for the honors in your haiku contest :)
Goff Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Raul, I was worried for a second, I didn't see a poem of yours right away! I gotta settle down! nice poem! jim
Freeman Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Amazing, how a butterfly moves, God bless,Moses Congratulations on freatured poem!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 4:07 AM
Raul, Free as a butterfly on the warm summer's sun. What a wonderful way to feel. Very nice haiku. Lovingly, Dane
Devonshire Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 8:10 PM
Lovely image, Raul. Butterlies are one of God's most beautiful creations. Love, Carolyn
Gorelick Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 6:03 PM
I am a big butterfly fan.Dont see as many as we used to unfortunately. this is a wonderful image..BG
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July 17, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting view. Love the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
Fraser Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Delightful imagery Raul>>James
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 2:50 AM
Beautifully written. Sara
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