Butterfly of Freedom

I was thinking of my youth,
which I occasionally do (SIGH).
When I remembered how I it was
to watch a butterfly.

They weren't around all that much to see
as I grew up in the big city.
Yet I had seen them fluttering about,
even trying to catch those so pretty.

Orange trimmed with black and gold,
morphed from their caterpillar caccoons.
Colors of the rainbow awing and floating by,
Even through the city's housing boom.

If one lands on you it is good luck,
or at least that's what they say.
I have had some good luck,
a long time ago, on another day.

The butterflys were with me
when I took tests at school.
They were with me before a game,
or when I felt like a fool.

The biggest ones came
when I was on one knee.
Asking that "Special Someone"
if she would marry me.

Oh, I don't know what color they were,
but they were in my tummy.
To this day I remember well,
they didn't taste very yummy.

They were there all the same,
fluttering about because all three were bold.
It was a big game, a test, and I felt the fool,
as she could say "No", and put my life on hold.

But those are the butterflys I overcame
kneeling before her that scary night.
She said, "Yes", and all was well
and ended my individual plight.

The butterflys went away,
and although we have laughed and shed tears.
Those butterflys are with me still,
even after all these years.

So when I see a butterfly now
in truth I can always see,
How swallowing my fear on that night,
the butterflys helped set me free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/19/2015 9:03:00 AM
I like happy endings, ongratulations!
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/19/2015 11:56:00 PM
Me, too. Although, I didn't say anything about how long she kept me on my knees waiting for an answer. It seemed like an eternity then, but what's that title...'Butterflys are Free!" I appreciate the comment.
Date: 12/18/2015 11:16:00 PM
Great take with this lovely poem Dan.. Congrats on big win!
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/19/2015 11:52:00 PM
Thank you, Upma. I appreciate your stopping to read and comments.
Date: 12/18/2015 10:31:00 PM
Came back to do the congratulations thing ... CayCay
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/19/2015 11:51:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay. I came back to say the "Thank you" thing. lol
Date: 12/18/2015 2:21:00 PM
Hello Dan, I often wondered when next I would see a write of yours, well done on the spot taken..'
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/18/2015 6:10:00 PM
Thanks, Joe. It was a spur of the moment decision to write it, but I felt it was something I had to say for us guys! I appreciate your read and comments on it.
Date: 12/18/2015 5:55:00 AM
Great win Dan!!
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/18/2015 6:04:00 PM
Thanks, Michael. I appreciate your stopping to read and comment on it.
Date: 12/18/2015 1:54:00 AM
Dan, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/18/2015 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I still have a queasy feeling about that sometimes, but butterflys or not...she still said yes. I appreciate the read and your comments.
Date: 12/17/2015 8:42:00 PM
Nicely done, Dan. Very creative! Congrats on your win! Sandra
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/18/2015 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Those butterflys were real and I was and still have them. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/17/2015 7:31:00 PM
DAN, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 12/18/2015 5:58:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT. It was such an unusual subject that I felt I had to write something for it. Keep this kind of contest going with any you do in the future. You'll be surprised by the response.
Date: 12/13/2015 9:32:00 AM
Lovely job, Dan - I hope it is in the contest. I enjoyed the creativity and wit. It is a fun and engaging poem .... CayCay
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Date: 12/13/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thanks, CayCay . I was trying to remember all the butterflys I had seen...color, size, circumstance. It was then that I realized where I have always had them, and I think others would agree with me. Especially those of us who have been on stage.
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