Butterfly Kisses

The Yellow Swallowtail Butterfly kissed the Lantana
Light its flight carried by the wind lands 'pon my bandana
No nourishment but the butterfly lingers

Gently the Swallowtail flies to land 'pon the Purple Flock
Drinks nectar from the honeyed bloom then touches 'pon windsock  
Off in flight comes once again lands 'pon my fingers

Sponsor: Gail Doyle
Contest: Butterfly Kisses
Rhyming couplets in a form of poulter's measure
With a interlocking tail rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thomas Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 5:19 PM
This is so beautiful, Sara...delicate sweet write, love it. Definitely a winner and thanks for comment on my poem:)
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 1:43 PM
a sure winner here, my friend - lovely images
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Sara this is marvelous. I love the image. I use to raise Monarch butterflies. I had many land 'pon my fingers. I enjoyed this one very much a fav. Warm Smiles, Connie
Trifiatis Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 11:53 PM
Artfully crafted! Good luck!
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 10:00 PM
I could really get the sense of the interlocking verses especially with the topic of the poem being as it was. Good entry!
Richards Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 12:49 PM
Oh wow......this beautiful poem matches the image of the butterfly..just lovely, Sara!!
Sivey Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 11:31 AM
Another harmonious write by you my friend! I truly loved reading this lovely poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
Gorelick Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:25 AM
So glad to see this form again.. its a great poem. I expect high marks for it. BG
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