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Butterfly Kiss

Desire takes a gentle leap between eyes when love blossoms in garden of romance. Lashes flutter like wings of butterflies on soft petals of an intimate trance. Jouissance engulfs the bodies and ties two souls in blinks of a repeated glance. For loving couples a heavenly bliss; gesture of love is a butterfly kiss. Date: 06/20/2017 Note: Butterfly Kiss is an intimate gesture of love. Caution: Don't try this unless you are sure. Otherwise, your partner may freak out. Anyone who is interested to know more can check out the link below. http://www.wikihow.com/Butterfly-Kiss Entered in two different contests. Early July standard contest by Brian Strand - *Placed Second* Ottava Rima contest by Janis Thompson - N/A

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/6/2017 6:44:00 AM

Greetings, Afzal. Congrats for your WIN, with this lovely piece!! ;-)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/10/2017 12:25:00 AM

Thank you, Teddy.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/5/2017 12:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Afzal!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/5/2017 11:16:00 PM

Thank you, Dale.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/5/2017 6:51:00 AM

I'm back to say CONGRATS, Afzal! Janice

Afzal Nusker
Date: 7/5/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thank you, Janice.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/25/2017 7:38:00 AM

Your butterfly kiss is delightfully and poetically explained, Afzal! Newcomers to this technique will now all be trying it out:) Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/25/2017 10:19:00 AM

It's so nice to see you here after a long time. Thanks for the visit & comments, Paul.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/25/2017 2:04:00 AM

Simply divine words. Good luck in the contest. Caution arouses curiosity got to check this out!!...Maria

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/25/2017 5:27:00 AM

Maria, thanks for such a gracious compliment. I suggest...do check out. Lol

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/21/2017 11:40:00 PM

Your poem is like a romantic song, Afzal:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/22/2017 12:24:00 AM

That is a very sweet compliment.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/21/2017 9:41:00 PM

Very well crafted my friend...and thanks for the heads up on the Butterfly Kiss lol...all the best ^WW^

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/22/2017 12:23:00 AM

Thank you, W.W.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2017 11:49:00 PM

My first romantic love taught me this. It was so sweet to do it with a man with such beautiful eyes. But the mouth kisses were to die for!!! Love this, Afzal.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/21/2017 12:00:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I'm sure you had a blast.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/20/2017 9:47:00 PM

Beautiful Ottava Rima Afzal, hope it does well in the contest.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/20/2017 11:15:00 PM

Thank you, John.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/20/2017 9:38:00 AM

This is sweet and lovely, Afzal. I presume you're familiar with the beautiful song by this name(?) Janice

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/20/2017 12:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice. Yes, I do know. It's beautiful.

Joseph May

Date: 6/20/2017 7:51:00 AM

Beautifully penned Afzal

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/20/2017 8:55:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2017 7:10:00 AM

Such a lovely poem and theme and what a beautiful tender romantic gesture Afzal - I will remind hubby not to put mascara on so we can try it (joke) lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker
Date: 6/20/2017 8:56:00 AM

Jan, thank you so much and yes mascara is not a good idea at all...haha.