Afzal Nusker Poet Ottava rima

Butterfly Kiss

Desire takes a gentle leap between eyes
          when love blossoms in garden of romance.
      Lashes flutter like wings of butterflies
 on soft petals of an intimate trance.
      Jouissance engulfs the bodies and ties
          two souls in blinks of a repeated glance.
For loving couples a heavenly bliss;
                       gesture of love is a butterfly kiss.


Date: 06/20/2017

Note: Butterfly Kiss is an intimate gesture of love.
Caution: Don't try this unless you are sure. Otherwise, your partner may freak out. Anyone who is interested to know more can check out the link below.
http://www.wikihow.com/Butterfly-Kiss

Entered in two different contests.
Early July standard contest by Brian Strand - *Placed Second*
Ottava Rima contest by Janis Thompson - N/A

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Teddy Kimathi July 6, 2017 at 6:44 AM Greetings, Afzal. Congrats for your WIN, with this lovely piece!! ;-) Afzal Nusker July 10, 2017 at 12:25 AM Thank you, Teddy.

Dale Gregory Cozart July 5, 2017 at 12:31 PM Congrats on your win, Afzal! Afzal Nusker July 5, 2017 at 11:16 PM Thank you, Dale.

Janice Canerdy July 5, 2017 at 6:51 AM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Afzal! Janice Afzal Nusker July 5, 2017 at 7:51 AM Thank you, Janice.

Paul Callus June 25, 2017 at 7:38 AM Your butterfly kiss is delightfully and poetically explained, Afzal! Newcomers to this technique will now all be trying it out:) Regards // paul Afzal Nusker June 25, 2017 at 10:19 AM It's so nice to see you here after a long time. Thanks for the visit & comments, Paul.

Maria Williams June 25, 2017 at 2:04 AM Simply divine words. Good luck in the contest. Caution arouses curiosity got to check this out!!...Maria Afzal Nusker June 25, 2017 at 5:27 AM Maria, thanks for such a gracious compliment. I suggest...do check out. Lol

Joanna Daniel June 21, 2017 at 11:40 PM Your poem is like a romantic song, Afzal:) Afzal Nusker June 22, 2017 at 12:24 AM That is a very sweet compliment.

Winged Warrior June 21, 2017 at 9:41 PM Very well crafted my friend...and thanks for the heads up on the Butterfly Kiss lol...all the best ^WW^ Afzal Nusker June 22, 2017 at 12:23 AM Thank you, W.W.

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2017 at 11:49 PM My first romantic love taught me this. It was so sweet to do it with a man with such beautiful eyes. But the mouth kisses were to die for!!! Love this, Afzal. Afzal Nusker June 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM Thank you, Andrea. I'm sure you had a blast.

John Hamilton June 20, 2017 at 9:47 PM Beautiful Ottava Rima Afzal, hope it does well in the contest. Afzal Nusker June 20, 2017 at 11:15 PM Thank you, John.

Janice Canerdy June 20, 2017 at 9:38 AM This is sweet and lovely, Afzal. I presume you're familiar with the beautiful song by this name(?) Janice Afzal Nusker June 20, 2017 at 12:33 PM Thank you so much, Janice. Yes, I do know. It's beautiful.

Joseph May June 20, 2017 at 7:51 AM Beautifully penned Afzal Afzal Nusker June 20, 2017 at 8:55 AM Thank you, Joseph.

Jan Allison June 20, 2017 at 7:10 AM Such a lovely poem and theme and what a beautiful tender romantic gesture Afzal - I will remind hubby not to put mascara on so we can try it (joke) lol:-) hugs Jan xx Afzal Nusker June 20, 2017 at 8:56 AM Jan, thank you so much and yes mascara is not a good idea at all...haha.