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Butterfly Kiss

All across an area Of poising purple peonies She's silently secretly stalking beautiful butterflies betrothed bright blue Wishing with wonder what wagers would want From ferociously fluttering fabulous faces Casting closely to colored camouflaging kaleidoscopes Until the usually utterly untrustworthy upon the unfortunate Lands lightly on lips, laminating labyrinths extreme exultations explode.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/11/2008 8:54:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2008 3:38:00 PM
THREE SENSATIONAL POEMS TO THE FINALS. BEST WISHES FOR THE NEXT ROUND DEAR HEART. eLAINE
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Date: 11/1/2008 7:16:00 PM
Alyssa another too the finals great job - this poem still looked awful hard to write - Congratulations - God Bless
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Date: 10/26/2008 4:39:00 PM
What an awesome write here, Alyssa and a well-deserved selection in the semi-finals of the PoetrySoup contest where you have THREE (!!) of your writes selected. Wow!! Good luck to you!
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Date: 8/29/2008 1:02:00 PM
This selection is charming, Alyssa. Congrats....a very clever alliteration. Love, Daver
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Date: 8/26/2008 6:05:00 AM
Very neat concept, Alyssa...it really is a good imagery poem!
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Date: 8/25/2008 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations Alyssa on your wonderful featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations Alyssa on your alliteration "Butterfly Kiss" being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2008 7:24:00 PM
This poem appears to have been very tricky to write - you did a wonderful job - congrats on the feature
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