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''Butterfly and Dragon''


And a very long time ago and far, far away,
            Beyond this earthly realm in a magic lovely land;
Can you imagine a beautiful girl who loved nature,
      Deep in a lush green forest dwelling happily all day.

Everyday she followed a vine tangled mossy path,
            Flowers wild and lovely and perfect delighted her;
Gathering them all in her arms to carry home,
      Happy and free the girl roamed without any fear.

In a cave close by lived a mean and evil, ugly, old witch,
            Jealous of the girls beauty she murmured;
Kneeling in front of a swirling caldron whispering low,
      Live in the forest forever as a butterfly, my pretty!

Moments later the girl was a pretty delicate butterfly.
            Now years have passed and the girl is doomed;
Only to live as a butterfly in the green forest forever, then,
      Pushing through vines one day a mighty dragon saw her.

Quietly, each day he watched smitten, he was so dazzled,
            Realizing soon it was love, he blew her some puffs;
Sweetly she floated to him swirling, admiring his lovely hues,
      Together they roamed from that day, amongst the green.

Under the stars they slept, he held her with his tangled tongue,
            Vivid were his amazing colors and his love;
Walking a forest path one day the mean witch saw them,
      Xanadu was their existence and she felt a sadness for them.

Yearning to make things right,  she turned him, and so;
     Zillions of years have passed for two beautiful butterflies, drifting.
                                                         

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July 3, 2015

Abecedarian

Submitted to the Premier Contest Number 7
sponsor, Skat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Eastman Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Beautiful and eloquent poem. Congrats on the wonderful win.
Eastman Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 12:03 PM
A Fav!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 3:07 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write broken!
Tor Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 2:45 AM
Nice win Broken wings.
Wigley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Very, very cleverly woven piece, BW. Marvellous. Congratulations and well done. Viv x
Cheema Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 9:56 PM
What a magical , fairy tale write! Will preserve this, Wings! Congrats on this mesmerising poem! Love, Balveen
Lindley Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:02 PM
My friend congrats on your fine poem and your win. A7
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Very lovely, Broken Wings, and written in such a difficult form. Congratulations on your well-deserved awesome win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Brokent Wing!!!What a wonderful write and using the Abecedarian made it even more perfect.
Horne Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 3:20 PM
wow, awesome write - I would find this form almost impossible. Hope you & the kitties are well & having a good week xx
Inman Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Didn't realize it was an Abecedarian until I finished reading it. Masterfully done, BW. Magical Tale!
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 4:01 PM
- A great story .... a fairytale B.W. :) - I wish you good luck in the contest .... and a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hay Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 5:39 AM
Love the magical imagry of this poem and the overall story, well done, warm regards, Laura.
Parker Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Enjoyed your imagination on this one, ..zillion is a very long time my poetic friend.
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 3:25 PM
absolutely charming imagery in your abecedarain Broken wings - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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