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Butterfly

She's like a butterfly - beautiful, fragile, and easy to get away, as she did three summers ago. Lo and behold! I sighted her in Tokyo last year, and she denied she was the one. Her bag-picking-disappearing eyes were really betraying her conviction, despite her hair dyed red, and cut short. Once again we fell in love, deeper than three summers ago. Like a butterfly I analyzed her beauty, felt her soft body, and held her tenderly. On the following day, I touched the traces of her, in form her perfume, and a letter she wrote, telling me "Goodye". Like a butterfly, she had taken flight; away from my grasp....

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Date: 8/8/2016 9:19:00 PM
That would drive me crazy. A love that elusive would make me be the one to fly away. You deserve better Teddy! I enjoyed your lovely poem. 7 ; )
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/9/2016 3:42:00 PM
Lol. thanks Connie, for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 8/3/2016 3:20:00 AM
Lovely.... I have a butterfly poem as well.... see whether or not you like it...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/3/2016 5:10:00 PM
We are all butterflies, dreaming of being human..... Thanks for your kind words...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/3/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pashang!! I'll read it, and let you know what I think...
Date: 7/31/2016 6:31:00 PM
this means you have to track her down once more... enjoyed the beauty of this work so well portrayed,teddy..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2016 2:24:00 AM
Lolest, when I do track her down, she'll escape my grasp once more.... Thank you so much Nette, for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 7/28/2016 11:48:00 PM
I love butterflies...but yes hard to catch lol...well written my friend Teddy...god bless...^WW^
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/29/2016 5:07:00 AM
Hehehe. Thanks so much ^WW^, for passing by to comment on my piece.... God bless you too!! ;-)
Date: 7/28/2016 8:57:00 AM
If you ever do catch her, please don't pin her to a collection on your wall. ;-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/29/2016 4:55:00 AM
Lol, I'll sure will, lest she appears in the "WANTED" List for breaking my heart. Thanks Tom, for commenting on my piece!! ;-)
Date: 7/28/2016 1:26:00 AM
what a lovely metaphor for such a flitting woman. let her flutter away and find a ladybug instead!!!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2016 2:24:00 AM
Hehehe.... A ladybug? You made my day, Andrea!! *_^ Tank you so much for reading and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 7/28/2016 1:03:00 AM
What a beautiful metaphor used here!! Lovely, Teddy:)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2016 2:21:00 AM
Lolest, thanks Jo!! ;-)

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