Butterfly

The wind blows the butterfly, bouncing in the air. The butterfly does not fight it, it coasts and rides the wind, opening its wings as if it were in control of this personal wave of wind. It reaches its destination.

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David Furlong

Date: 3/3/2015 12:38:00 AM

How to go with the flow... beautifully expressed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2015 1:16:00 PM

Congrats on your poem being featured on home page today..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2015 8:40:00 PM

Mike, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Mike Liquori
Date: 2/23/2015 8:30:00 AM

Dear A.Poet Destroyer, I am glad to not have been....instead welcomed with open arms, kind words and an invitation to write with ya. Thank you and have a great year as well.

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2015 10:16:00 PM

Mike, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Mike Liquori
Date: 2/27/2015 5:53:00 PM

Dear Skat, Sorry for the delay and thank you for the welcome. I have to tell you I have been reading your poetry and I am blown away. Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry and I look forward to reading more of yours.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2015 1:22:00 PM

Absolutely delightful:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/20/2015 1:11:00 PM

Excellent pen Mike! Butterflies are so g beautiful and seem to go with the flow but still they seem to be in control of their own fate. I liked your piece. A 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) xxx D."