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Butterfly

| Butterfly | Bioluminescence skies Blissful seeking the seas Beating wind beneath wings Breathless view one can see Blue skies Atala soars Blackest wings glide towards Birthing into the night

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/26/2023 2:47:00 PM

Your pleiades is a masterpiece, carefully and skillfully crafted. The theme is brilliantly showcased through your arrangement of words, painting a vivid picture in the reader's mind. The description is so captivating and enchanting that it leaves me in awe. Two lines, in particular, stand out as they are exquisitely beautiful and poetic. The words "Beating wind beneath wings" evoke a sense of freedom and exhilaration, as if one is soaring through the sky. And the phrase "Breathless view one can see" captures the breathtaking and awe-inspiring sights that one can witness. Overall, your pleiades is a work of art, filled with vivid details that transport the reader to a world of beauty and wonder.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/16/2023 12:54:00 AM

I find it very unique how you’ve described skies as bioluminescent, gives a very magical imagery, i love bioluminescence how they sparkle and glow in the dark. “ beating wind beneath the wings” beautiful line. You’ve described butterflies in a very dreamy manner: a beautiful pleiades it makes me happy seeing you write for contests here: hope to see more from you. Lovely to have you here connected. You are truly a gem

Tom Woody

Date: 9/15/2023 3:36:00 PM

Beautiful butterfly beatitudes Daisy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/15/2023 7:18:00 AM

So beautifully described--your poem invokes dynamic images of butterfly--perfect for the contest theme.

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2023 3:29:00 AM

A lovely pleiades. You used the theme very well with your arrangement of words... it is very descriptive and i love the blue skies atala soars line.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 11:57:00 PM

Awesome pleiades on a butterfly, Daisy:)

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/12/2023 11:45:00 AM

very beautifully written!enjoyed your poem.Good luck

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/11/2023 5:56:00 AM

This is a stunning Pleiades Daisy. So clever and well written.So elegant and delightfully visual. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the competition. X

Valsa George

Date: 9/11/2023 3:27:00 AM

"Beating wind beneath wings Breathless view one can see"! As the butterflies soar high into the air with wind under their wings, they present a breath taking view. Lovely poem dear Daisy Silk! All the Best in the contest.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/10/2023 6:05:00 AM

Oh my dear beautiful Daisy, this is such a stunning and ethereal pleiades that captures such a broad essence of beauty and the mystique of spellbinding butterflies! "Bioluminescence skies" That opening line itself is so breathtaking.. "Beating wind beneath wings" How gorgeous and elegant! "Birthing into the night" I love how you've woven such vivid tapestries with your exquisite words here.. Wishing you the best of luck for the contest, I truly love this take! :)

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/10/2023 8:24:00 PM

Oh, sweet petals your comments always fill me with warmness, you heart is enormous and you always decode my poems so beautifully. Thank you for your time to read my piece

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/10/2023 1:14:00 AM

A wonderful Pleiades. Great use of imagery. Best for a win.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk
Date: 9/10/2023 8:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Victor. I'm grateful you read my poem