Notes About The Poem

Written September 9, 2023
For The Contest, “Pleiades”“
(Albatross, Butterfly, Clouds, or Daffodil) 
Sponsor, Joseph May

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Butterfly

Beneath the oak tree limb- Bound, lies a gray cocoon; Bright, new transformation Becoming freshly wrought. Birthed from a furry worm, Butterfly wings take flight- Bestow transcending view.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Scott Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Sandra this is delightful in it's perfection and observation, "Birthed from a furry worm" made me smile :-))
James Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win Sandra. Emilia : )
Merryman Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Sandra, I like how you started from the very beginning until a butterfly is born. Great pleiades! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Miller Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 1:03 AM
Brilliant; congratulations.
May Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Very nicely done Sandra, Congrats on your win
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