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Butterfly

Begun as a small worm
Before a silk cocoon
Becomes more colorful
Beating its wings to spring
By and between sucks its
Blossoms to Bellflower
Blackberry, Bluebonnet…


9/8/2023

butterflypleiades

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Kim Merryman

September 15, 2023 at 7:28 PM

Eve, I like that you started from the very beginning of butterfly life. A lovely write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Eve Roper

September 15, 2023 at 7:40 PM

Thank you so much, Kim.

Joseph May

September 11, 2023 at 8:44 AM

Very nicely penned Eve, Congrats on your win

Victor Buhagiar

September 9, 2023 at 2:06 AM

Wonderful, Eve. Your Pleiades is a history of a birth of a butterfly, so necessary for human life. Hugs.

Perry Campanella

September 8, 2023 at 8:27 PM

Hi, Eve Roper - butterflies are poetry in motion -so much more colorful in your Pleiades poem you have created for folks to enjoy - Good Luck - stay safe too! Perry C.