Butterfly

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Begun as a small worm Before a silk cocoon Becomes more colorful Beating its wings to spring By and between sucks its Blossoms to Bellflower Blackberry, Bluebonnet… 9/8/2023

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/15/2023 7:28:00 PM

Eve, I like that you started from the very beginning of butterfly life. A lovely write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2023 7:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim.

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 8:44:00 AM

Very nicely penned Eve, Congrats on your win

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2023 2:06:00 AM

Wonderful, Eve. Your Pleiades is a history of a birth of a butterfly, so necessary for human life. Hugs.

Perry Campanella

Date: 9/8/2023 8:27:00 PM

Hi, Eve Roper - butterflies are poetry in motion -so much more colorful in your Pleiades poem you have created for folks to enjoy - Good Luck - stay safe too! Perry C.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/8/2023 2:47:00 PM

Buffalo clover! Lovely to read a poem about butterflies. Yours is very nice!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/8/2023 12:19:00 PM

This is so light and charming like the butterfly itself, best of luck for the contest~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2023 11:56:00 AM

- A lovely butterfly it will be... best wishes in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend, Eve :) - hugs