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UNSUPPORTED CODE The butterfly chaser was two years old and two feet tall The blue shoes on her feet mattered to her most of all On it she could squat all day long Sitting on them she inspected the moist soil Where the Mynah had just run along She did find footprints, delicate and small She sat drawing on the mud with fingers and nails Where the garden sweeper had left her a large clean spot She pretended deaf to all the common sounds She was the silent knower of right and wrong. UNSUPPORTED CODE

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Date: 7/8/2018 7:11:00 PM
Cute...
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Date: 7/5/2018 3:00:00 PM
a lovely little first post here at Soup. I enjoyed your character study of this tiny tot!!
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Date: 6/21/2018 10:02:00 AM
Such a wonderful first post here, it was a really nice poem and a joy to read especially the last line "she was the silent knower of right and wrong "good luck and have a nice day
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Date: 6/21/2018 5:37:00 AM
Vidya, really nice butterfly write! What was with the "UNSUPPORTED CODE" at beginning and end???
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Vidya Raghunathan
Date: 6/28/2018 4:07:00 AM
thanks for pointing it out

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