Butterflies: Haiku


delicate dancers 
tiptoeing from bloom to bloom 
beauties of springtime 







by Zyrool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Treacher Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 10:33 PM
Tiptoeing describes their light touch so beautifully
Gifford Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 11:20 PM
Thank you for the read and your lovely words,Rachel. Wishing you a wonderful day.
Marc Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:27 AM
great haiku ~ such a delicate dance.
Gifford Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Hello P.M, thank you for the visit and your kind words. Much appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful day, fellow poet.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 1:31 AM
This is indeed a magnificent haiku.
Gifford Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment, Victor. Means a lot. Wishing you a beautiful new week ahead, my friend.
George Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 9:44 PM
Wow... so lovely, dear Zyrool. I enjoy their delicate dance in my garden and keenly watch their movement from bloom to bloom.
Gifford Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 11:31 PM
Hello Valsa, thank you for the visit. They are so magical and beautiful to look at. Our creator is so generous to us. Have a beautiful day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:06 AM
What a cute imsge
Gifford Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Have an amazing weekend my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 7:41 AM
I have seen two yellow swallowtails already this spring. I hope they survived with so little food for them to survive on. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara K
Gifford Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 8:21 AM
Hello Sara, thank you for dropping by. Your neck of the woods sounds heavenly. Enjoy your day my friend.
Greenhough Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 5:41 PM
I love your haiku. The tiptoeing butterflies are a magical impression.
Gifford Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 1:48 AM
Hello Hilda, thank you so for the read and your lovely words. Wishing you a great day and a fabulous weekend, my friend.
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 1:03 AM
Lovely
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 1:35 AM
Thanks dear! May your day be blessed as well!
Gifford Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 1:30 AM
Thank you so much for the read, Karen. Wishing you a beautifully blessed day, my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 5:20 AM
Ahh!!, Zyrool, what a lovely Haiku. I enjoyed reading it and feeling it movements. Sara K
Gifford Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 9:18 AM
Thank you for the read, so glad you enjoyed it,Sara. Wishing you a beautiful day, my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 2:52 AM
That is incredibly beautiful.
Gifford Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Hello Victor, glad you think so, you made my day. Sending Blessings your way, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 12:46 PM
- Lovely haiku, Zyrool :) - Haiku is one of my favorite forms :) - hugs
Gifford Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. They are fun writing them. Have a wonderful day, my friend.
Bauer Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 11:21 AM
this is lovely, zyrool! i enjoyed...
Gifford Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Hello Ilene, thank you for dropping by and your nice words. Wishing you a wonderful rest of the week my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your pretty "Butterflies: Haiku" write. I Love Butterflies... Have a blessed spring day writing away.........
Gifford Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Thank you for dropping by and your lovely words,Paula. I think there’s something magical about them. Wishing you a fantastic new week ahead, my friend.
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