Butterflies: Haiku


delicate dancers 
tiptoeing from bloom to bloom 
beauties of springtime 







by Zyrool

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Date: 5/23/2025 9:27:00 AM
great haiku ~ such a delicate dance.
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:52:00 AM
Hello P.M, thank you for the visit and your kind words. Much appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful day, fellow poet.
Date: 4/7/2025 1:31:00 AM
This is indeed a magnificent haiku.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/7/2025 5:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment, Victor. Means a lot. Wishing you a beautiful new week ahead, my friend.
Date: 4/1/2025 9:44:00 PM
Wow... so lovely, dear Zyrool. I enjoy their delicate dance in my garden and keenly watch their movement from bloom to bloom.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 4/1/2025 11:31:00 PM
Hello Valsa, thank you for the visit. They are so magical and beautiful to look at. Our creator is so generous to us. Have a beautiful day my friend.
Date: 3/29/2025 10:06:00 AM
What a cute imsge
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/29/2025 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Have an amazing weekend my friend.
Date: 3/29/2025 7:41:00 AM
I have seen two yellow swallowtails already this spring. I hope they survived with so little food for them to survive on. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara K
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/29/2025 8:21:00 AM
Hello Sara, thank you for dropping by. Your neck of the woods sounds heavenly. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 3/27/2025 5:41:00 PM
I love your haiku. The tiptoeing butterflies are a magical impression.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/28/2025 1:48:00 AM
Hello Hilda, thank you so for the read and your lovely words. Wishing you a great day and a fabulous weekend, my friend.
Date: 3/27/2025 1:03:00 AM
Lovely
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2025 1:35:00 AM
Thanks dear! May your day be blessed as well!
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/27/2025 1:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for the read, Karen. Wishing you a beautifully blessed day, my friend.
Date: 3/25/2025 5:20:00 AM
Ahh!!, Zyrool, what a lovely Haiku. I enjoyed reading it and feeling it movements. Sara K
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/25/2025 9:18:00 AM
Thank you for the read, so glad you enjoyed it,Sara. Wishing you a beautiful day, my friend.
Date: 3/25/2025 2:52:00 AM
That is incredibly beautiful.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/25/2025 9:20:00 AM
Hello Victor, glad you think so, you made my day. Sending Blessings your way, my friend.
Date: 3/24/2025 12:46:00 PM
- Lovely haiku, Zyrool :) - Haiku is one of my favorite forms :) - hugs
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/25/2025 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. They are fun writing them. Have a wonderful day, my friend.
Date: 3/24/2025 11:21:00 AM
this is lovely, zyrool! i enjoyed...
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/25/2025 9:22:00 AM
Hello Ilene, thank you for dropping by and your nice words. Wishing you a wonderful rest of the week my friend.
Date: 3/24/2025 10:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your pretty "Butterflies: Haiku" write. I Love Butterflies... Have a blessed spring day writing away.........
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/24/2025 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by and your lovely words,Paula. I think there’s something magical about them. Wishing you a fantastic new week ahead, my friend.
Date: 3/24/2025 6:10:00 AM
My wife loves butterflies and dragonflies. Nice snippet of nature Zy
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/24/2025 8:43:00 AM
Hello Tom, thank you for the read. That’s so nice to hear that your wife likes them too. The fireflies are in my next poem.. Have a wonderful new week ahead my friend.
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