Moon Flower Poet Tanka

Butterflies Flowing

Butterflies flowing
in your stomach, speckled
But feeling tickled
Faltered and yet faded
Oh, soul wavered yet has longed for

09.11.17

Third Place
"Poems that Paint a Picture "
Silent One's Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2017 at 8:43 PM I see you got a win with this one too. Congratulations, Moon Flower! Moon Flower December 18, 2017 at 10:19 AM Thank you, Andrea. :)

James Inman September 21, 2017 at 12:20 PM A lovely Tanka. Moon Flower September 21, 2017 at 12:51 PM Thank you, James

Constance La France September 13, 2017 at 9:25 AM Moon, CONGRATULATIONS Moon Flower September 15, 2017 at 10:18 PM Thank you, Constance!

Silent One September 13, 2017 at 6:54 AM A lovely tanka, but I was looking for something a bit longer to be honest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Moon Flower September 15, 2017 at 10:18 PM Thank you for the placement, Silent O.