Butterflies Don'T Care

This morning the butterflies left 
my kitchen curtains
upon a morning breeze 
they fluttered away
through the open window
laughing as they flew
I followed with a net 
but off they scampered
over the neighbour's hedge
and into the sunshine

Returning to my kitchen,
I could hear their titterings,
their mockings
at their new found freedom
but I was left alone
thinking how much
those curtains had cost me
at Woolworth's and that I 
probably could never find
another pair like them..

but butterflies don't care..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freakasso Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 1:07 AM
Hi Valerie, nice poetic thought.A true lepidopterist in whose net indeed;no butterflies were caught.Congrats! On being featured.God Bless...PRINCE
Anish Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 10:03 AM
"Butter flies are free"! Nice poem. Good images! Thanks you for your kind words
Goff Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 6:53 PM
I love this kind of emotional leaping, something the Spanish Poets are good at! well done! Valerie...jim
Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:41 PM
Beautiful poem Valerie, i can just picture the butterflies looking back>>James
Richards Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 1:36 PM
Oh Valerie...don't know why this poem just captured my mind....absolutely loved this simple pondering !! I pictured (maybe I'm wrong)...butterflies of the fine fabric..had faded away in the sunshine...as if they were alive, and able to leave those old curtains behind....irreplaceable Woolworth curtains. Lovely....:)
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