Butterflies

Building me up from within
Understanding a smile returning with grin
Turquoise love that is a wonderful win
Timid yet optimistic it will never end
Ears that hear your hearts denim desire
Racing pulse burning within like red fire
Feeling a touch from a king a black sire
Longing to prove our love from higher
Indigo inspiration heaven sent
Emerald eyes with tears lament 
So much to feel butterflies intense
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Date: 3/28/2024 7:50:00 PM
Awesome, Karen. All the lines were perfect, and high octane emotion. Groovy, as we osed to say.)): Pangie xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/29/2024 5:26:00 AM
Pangie I appreciate your kind words! Hugs
Date: 3/27/2024 1:25:00 PM
“Denim desire” now thats one unique word pair right ther. Dear karen i love the way your acrostic flows in such eloquence so seamless and with such creative diction and emotions that readers can feel as they read through your lines! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 2:30:00 PM
Ink Empress so pleased you like it! I appreciate your support and kind thoughts. Thank you!
Date: 3/27/2024 10:26:00 AM
I enjoy how you portray love's colorfully splendid dimensions. Your elusive butterfly of love flutterers with a lovely iridescence! My best, Robert
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 12:14:00 PM
So glad you like it Robert!
Date: 3/27/2024 5:02:00 AM
A beautiful exchange of emotions, Karen. Love exudes throughout.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 9:46:00 AM
Aw thank you Vijay!
Date: 3/26/2024 9:08:00 PM
Your acrostic poem seems to speak with fluttering wings of love. It innovative. I enjoy it.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 12:46:00 AM
I’m so happy you like it Hilda! Thanks
Date: 3/26/2024 5:43:00 PM
"I" loved this! The art it posseses as if they were writen from before. To be shared.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 6:22:00 PM
Thanks! Hugs
Date: 3/26/2024 1:04:00 PM
Lovely acrostic Karen...
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Silent One!
Date: 3/26/2024 12:17:00 PM
They butterflies got you all a flutter. I can see wine and song and all night long.
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 12:40:00 PM
lol oh my you make me blush Paul!
Date: 3/26/2024 9:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this fun/wonderful Acrostic write. I love butterflies... I love reading your writes. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away...........
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 10:23:00 AM
Thanks so much Paula!
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