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Butterflies

Building me up from within Understanding a smile returning with grin Turquoise love that is a wonderful win Timid yet optimistic it will never end Ears that hear your hearts denim desire Racing pulse burning within like red fire Feeling a touch from a king a black sire Longing to prove our love from higher Indigo inspiration heaven sent Emerald eyes with tears lament So much to feel butterflies intense

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/28/2024 7:50:00 PM

Awesome, Karen. All the lines were perfect, and high octane emotion. Groovy, as we osed to say.)): Pangie xx

Karen Jones
Date: 3/29/2024 5:26:00 AM

Pangie I appreciate your kind words! Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 3/27/2024 1:25:00 PM

“Denim desire” now thats one unique word pair right ther. Dear karen i love the way your acrostic flows in such eloquence so seamless and with such creative diction and emotions that readers can feel as they read through your lines! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light

Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 2:30:00 PM

Ink Empress so pleased you like it! I appreciate your support and kind thoughts. Thank you!

Robert Gorelick

Date: 3/27/2024 10:26:00 AM

I enjoy how you portray love's colorfully splendid dimensions. Your elusive butterfly of love flutterers with a lovely iridescence! My best, Robert

Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 12:14:00 PM

So glad you like it Robert!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2024 5:02:00 AM

A beautiful exchange of emotions, Karen. Love exudes throughout.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 9:46:00 AM

Aw thank you Vijay!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/26/2024 9:08:00 PM

Your acrostic poem seems to speak with fluttering wings of love. It innovative. I enjoy it.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/27/2024 12:46:00 AM

I’m so happy you like it Hilda! Thanks

The Situation

Date: 3/26/2024 5:43:00 PM

"I" loved this! The art it posseses as if they were writen from before. To be shared.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 6:22:00 PM

Thanks! Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/26/2024 4:22:00 PM

a wonderful Acrostic that's also a romance poem. How creative is that. I especially liked the last line! enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 6:23:00 PM

Sara thanks and good evening.

Silent One

Date: 3/26/2024 1:04:00 PM

Lovely acrostic Karen...

Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 1:37:00 PM

Thanks Silent One!

Paul Bell

Date: 3/26/2024 12:17:00 PM

They butterflies got you all a flutter. I can see wine and song and all night long.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 12:40:00 PM

lol oh my you make me blush Paul!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2024 9:03:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this fun/wonderful Acrostic write. I love butterflies... I love reading your writes. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away...........

Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 10:23:00 AM

Thanks so much Paula!