Butterflies

Building me up from within
Understanding a smile returning with grin
Turquoise love that is a wonderful win
Timid yet optimistic it will never end
Ears that hear your hearts denim desire
Racing pulse burning within like red fire
Feeling a touch from a king a black sire
Longing to prove our love from higher
Indigo inspiration heaven sent
Emerald eyes with tears lament 
So much to feel butterflies intense
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Romios Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 7:50 PM
Awesome, Karen. All the lines were perfect, and high octane emotion. Groovy, as we osed to say.)): Pangie xx
Jones Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 5:26 AM
Pangie I appreciate your kind words! Hugs
Empress Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 1:25 PM
“Denim desire” now thats one unique word pair right ther. Dear karen i love the way your acrostic flows in such eloquence so seamless and with such creative diction and emotions that readers can feel as they read through your lines! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Ink Empress so pleased you like it! I appreciate your support and kind thoughts. Thank you!
Gorelick Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 10:26 AM
I enjoy how you portray love's colorfully splendid dimensions. Your elusive butterfly of love flutterers with a lovely iridescence! My best, Robert
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 12:14 PM
So glad you like it Robert!
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 5:02 AM
A beautiful exchange of emotions, Karen. Love exudes throughout.
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Aw thank you Vijay!
Greenhough Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:08 PM
Your acrostic poem seems to speak with fluttering wings of love. It innovative. I enjoy it.
Jones Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 12:46 AM
I’m so happy you like it Hilda! Thanks
Situation Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 5:43 PM
"I" loved this! The art it posseses as if they were writen from before. To be shared.
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:22 PM
Thanks! Hugs
One Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Lovely acrostic Karen...
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Thanks Silent One!
Bell Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 12:17 PM
They butterflies got you all a flutter. I can see wine and song and all night long.
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 12:40 PM
lol oh my you make me blush Paul!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:03 AM
I enjoyed reading this fun/wonderful Acrostic write. I love butterflies... I love reading your writes. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away...........
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:23 AM
Thanks so much Paula!
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