Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Butchers Paper

BUTCHER’S PAPER

population growth, wrapped in butcher’s paper, blossoming beautifully

eyes dot the vainglorious poppies — bloodshot with remembrance

6/1/2018
Silent One’s When one line is not enough
33 syllables

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Line Gauthier June 9, 2018 at 9:59 PM Congrats on your top win, Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2018 at 11:30 PM Thank you, Line!

Subimal Sinha-Roy June 5, 2018 at 2:42 AM Congratulations, Kim on your fine win. Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2018 at 6:47 AM Thank you, Subimal!

Eve Roper June 4, 2018 at 11:06 PM Great verse, Kim, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2018 at 6:47 AM Thank you, Eve!

Susan Gentry June 4, 2018 at 9:08 PM Congratulations on your win! Well done. Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2018 at 9:09 PM Thank you, Susan!

Michelle Faulkner June 4, 2018 at 2:18 PM Congratulations on your placement, Kim! Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2018 at 4:43 PM Thank you, Michelle!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2018 at 8:11 AM - Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2018 at 8:53 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs xx Kim

Elaine George June 4, 2018 at 7:07 AM A two line masterpiece, Kim...Absolutely BRILLIANT! Many congrats on your win. Elaine Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thanks so much, Elaine!xx Kim

Silent One June 4, 2018 at 6:20 AM Never forget.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thank you, Silent! Blessings...Kim

Mystic Rose Rose June 1, 2018 at 7:26 PM some powerful lines gathered under the umbrella of sacrifice and love. Winning wishes sent your way Kim Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2018 at 9:01 PM Thanks so much,my friend!

Michelle Faulkner June 1, 2018 at 4:32 PM 'bloodshot with remembrance', great line, Kim (reminds me of "In Flanders Field,") Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2018 at 4:53 PM Thanks, Michelle!

Richard Lamoureux June 1, 2018 at 9:19 AM I like this one a lot. I suspect Silent will also appreciate this one. Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2018 at 9:22 AM I appreciate that, Richard! I watched a tv program where they showed souls lost by added poppies. Thank you <3