Butcher

Scans from side to side,
Bag of tricks in his damp hand,
Breathing heavy now,
Hears voices and creeps away,
Unobserved in the dense fog.

Spots a lone woman,
Approaches, raises his hat,
She smiles, takes his arm,
He knows she doesn’t suspect
That he is Jack the Ripper…

Jack Horne for Linda-Marie's Bag of Tricks contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/25/2011 10:45:00 PM
Congrats jack on your 2nd place win in the contest.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 7:53:00 AM
Hey there Jack ;-) Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest!!! lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/24/2011 5:01:00 AM
like what I've said days ago. . .be a WINNER !!!! hehe >>>>smile ~~~~CONGRATULATIONS with this terrific fantastic write. . . .*-* junjun
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:19:00 AM
hey Jack, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:53:00 PM
Great scary poem Jack. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2011 2:08:00 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda,jack
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Date: 7/23/2011 1:55:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your success in my contest luv and thankxx for your support... a very unique creative piece .. was enthralled..
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Date: 7/23/2011 12:23:00 PM
oohh scary! congratulations on your win Jack :)
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Date: 7/23/2011 12:16:00 PM
I really dig this one. I love stephen king kind of stuff! SInce seeing the winners list, I realized many people wrote about anything related to a bag of tricks, so yours is very deserving of the winner circle and in my opinion, an even higher spot! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/19/2011 9:25:00 PM
Yow! Sounds like a guy that could silence lambs.
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Date: 7/12/2011 3:33:00 PM
A bloody, awful bag of tricks. I'm reading one now by James Patterson - Pop Goes the Weasel - which reminds me of that smooth talking maniac Jack. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:16:00 PM
Oooo!WoW! I knew it was he before I read the second stanza. Good Creepy Job Here. Good one for Halloween. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:08:00 PM
oh jack was a sly one that is for sure. a great write Jack.
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Date: 7/10/2011 7:08:00 PM
thankxx Jack for your sweet compliments so uplifting my friend.. much appreciated luv..
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Date: 7/10/2011 8:52:00 AM
Jack, I read something about a member of the Royal Family being suspected as Jack the Ripper. Wonder if you heard anything about this. Scary poem; I love it! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:58:00 AM
hmmm, I thought this poem was supposed to be describing one's OWN personal bag of tricks. You are one scary dude then. heehee. I really LIKE this one, Jack. and you DID use your own name after all. VERY good!!
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Date: 7/8/2011 2:19:00 PM
scary yet beautifully woven, jack... sizzling piece! ...winning wishes to you!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/8/2011 1:19:00 PM
Nice approach to do the contest jack...enjoyed this creative write..best wishes.
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Date: 7/8/2011 12:08:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Jack.. good luck luv .. know I will be fascinated by your lines reading at judging..appreciate luv..
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Date: 7/8/2011 9:38:00 AM
A GREAT ONE...SURELY,...BE A WINNER... GOODLUCK..*_*JUNJUN
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Date: 7/8/2011 8:47:00 AM
Surprise ending..I was expecting something about a butcher shorting his customers..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest...Sara
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