But There's Something More-N

As the chairman I invited some people for presentation
Those who didn’t get invited wanted to know the reason
A reasonable thing to know why they were not invited
But there’s something more to it than not as it seemed.

Though paradoxical as it sounds, there’s often no reason
Good applicants get rejected not that it seems bad often
But there’re sufficient number of others that seem good
But there’s something more to it than not as it seemed.

There were physical limits on numbers we met in person
Not invited wasn’t because something wrong for any reason 
But by other stellar applicants they’re just down pushed
But there’s something more to it than not as it seemed.

Worse to face were the hints for favors from authority
Bearing on decisions as Chairman along with committee
Handed over the post to an aspiring man fit to be deemed
But there’s something more to it than not as it seemed.

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Dr. Ram Mehta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 8:35 PM
Dr. Ram You have penned a powerful and deep write that makes the reader think about the answers to these words. thank you for the great comment on my Moon poem.;
Duncan Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 8:13 PM
Nothing ever is as it seems,, right,, I like it ;}
Pettit Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Unlike Terry Malloy, this one looks like a contender that will get a shot at the title and not a one-way ticket to Palookaville. Good writing Doctor.
Maverick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 1:40 PM
best wishes in the contest Dr Ram.
Devonshire Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Wow!! Fabulous take on the "Not As It Seems" theme, Paula. That last verse hits a home run in my book and I know I've just read a winner. Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM
What you have penned here ist so true! So well written!! Wish you best of success in the contest! And have a great new year. Thank you also for your always kind comments!...Gert
Brown Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 7:52 AM
You can't please everyone. Best wishes Dr. Ram.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 7:37 AM
Dr. Ram u constantly stir my creative juices my friend.. and your latest comment has caused me to ask u questions in Soup Mail..luv..
La France Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 6:29 AM
A "very" good example of something "not as it seems" many of us have felt the sting of not being invited and wondered why, you expressed these feelings of wondering very well in your poem . . . best of luck in the contest
Onclaud Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 8:57 PM
a brilliant write on values being riddled... hope this fantastic piece places high in the contest, dr. ram.. invitng you to check my latest piece and thanking you for the greetings on rick's rick's project:) nette
Sweetheart Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:25 PM
A very impressive write Dr. Ram.. a most enjoyable read and entry for the contest.. good luck my friend as this awesome piece will surely place high with it's brilliant shine of words and storyline... good luck...with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:10 PM
Good luck in the contest...May your work continue to expand and touch on the lives of many..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Dr. Ram, this is a very interesting approach to the contest. Did you ever open your contest yet? I am hurrying to get offline so I don't even have time to check new contests. Anyway, I wish you luck with Paula's. Luv, andrea
Cheeseman Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Great write friend and understand the content
Duffin Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Hello Dr Ram. Thanks for the visit. Great work Love the way the last line is repeated. best of luck in the contest. Eamon
Bagnall Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:08 AM
I can see what you are hinting at, but I'm not familliar with the Kyrielle, or the conpetition requirements, a pleasant read none the less.
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