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But For You

But for you, I would leave But for you, I would grieve For our lives are as one And less you there is none The love you give to me Has saved my life, you see For in the dark, I dwelled A tree that had been felled Yet once you came my way The night had turned to day I found the will to live I found the love to give What I say, is not new Yet in trust, it is true From a soul bound to break From a heart bound to ache But for you, life is bleak But for you, I am weak So much, I know not of But I know I have love 2/8/18 Contest: 120 words Sponsor; Silent One

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Date: 2/14/2018 5:26:00 PM
Just tell me Mike, got em' right. You won me, lol. Great job.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/14/2018 7:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Normie I appreciate your kind words!!
Date: 2/11/2018 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Mike, nicely done and enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme to make a have way good poem .. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:24:00 AM
Loved it Mike, thank you and congratulations...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/11/2018 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Charlie!!
Date: 2/10/2018 10:10:00 AM
Lovely. Congrats on your win, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/10/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line xxoo
Date: 2/10/2018 10:09:00 AM
Hi Mike, When love is right, it can do amazing things. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/10/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis!!!
Date: 2/10/2018 9:16:00 AM
Very sweet Mike.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/10/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Silent One it was a fun challenge!!!
Date: 2/9/2018 5:52:00 PM
This is excellent! Amazing poem. It should do well in the contest :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/9/2018 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi Xxoo
Date: 2/9/2018 2:15:00 PM
Wow! This is a great poem for the contest. Good luck. xxx-ooo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/9/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene xxoo
Date: 2/9/2018 10:57:00 AM
Excellent depiction, Mike! A heartfelt tribute to love..best for a win.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/9/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!!
Date: 2/9/2018 10:14:00 AM
How VERY sweet and beautiful Mike! A loving tribute to that special someone in your life. A great write!!! Best of luck in the contest!! ~Judy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/9/2018 11:10:00 AM
Thanks Judy xxoo

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