Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

But But But

Grandma,
I know
you know
that it's my
ultimate favorite
but I must refuse to eat it
I am too afeared
because today
looking straight at me
there is a 
S H A R K 
in my bowl 
of alphabet soup



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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M. L. Kiser December 19, 2018 at 10:37 AM Oh my, now that's got to be a winner! Good luck. Line Gauthier December 20, 2018 at 8:38 PM LOL there will be many gems. Thanks for your vote of confidence, ML. Most appreciated.

CayCay Godwin December 18, 2018 at 6:22 PM That's cute. CayCay Line Gauthier December 18, 2018 at 7:24 PM Thanks, CayCay. Much appreciated.

Charlie Smith December 18, 2018 at 3:27 PM Not the shark! Good one Line, best wishes... Line Gauthier December 18, 2018 at 7:24 PM Yes, the dreaded shark!

Robert L. Hinshaw December 18, 2018 at 12:39 PM Great entry for the contest, Line! Merry Christmas to you and your family - Bob Line Gauthier December 18, 2018 at 7:24 PM Thanks, Bob. Much appreciated. Best wishes.

Timothy Mcguire December 18, 2018 at 12:06 PM Great! Love the idea of this poem. Timothy Mcguire December 18, 2018 at 8:33 PM My heritage is from Kentucky I understand "Afeared". I would refuse too! Line Gauthier December 18, 2018 at 7:25 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.

Chris Green December 18, 2018 at 9:47 AM This was really cool Line. Best wishes in the contest Line Gauthier December 18, 2018 at 7:25 PM Thanks, Chris. Most appreciated.