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Grandma, I know you know that it's my ultimate favorite but I must refuse to eat it I am too afeared because today looking straight at me there is a S H A R K in my bowl of alphabet soup submitted on December 18, 2018 for contest SHARK IN THE SOUP sponsored by ANTHONY SLAUSEN

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Date: 12/19/2018 10:37:00 AM
Oh my, now that's got to be a winner! Good luck.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/20/2018 8:38:00 PM
LOL there will be many gems. Thanks for your vote of confidence, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/18/2018 6:22:00 PM
That's cute. CayCay
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thanks, CayCay. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/18/2018 3:27:00 PM
Not the shark! Good one Line, best wishes...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2018 7:24:00 PM
Yes, the dreaded shark!
Date: 12/18/2018 12:39:00 PM
Great entry for the contest, Line! Merry Christmas to you and your family - Bob
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thanks, Bob. Much appreciated. Best wishes.
Date: 12/18/2018 12:06:00 PM
Great! Love the idea of this poem.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/18/2018 8:33:00 PM
My heritage is from Kentucky I understand "Afeared". I would refuse too!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2018 7:25:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 12/18/2018 9:47:00 AM
This was really cool Line. Best wishes in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2018 7:25:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. Most appreciated.

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