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But a Whisper Pt 1

But a Whisper From the Childs perspective Part 1 of 2 In my minds’ eye this life that I see is my very own upon your knee. While I was in heaven in the heart of God waiting to be born, I was full of excitement anticipating I wanted a Mother to adore. I wanted a Mother to hold me tight, safe within her arms. Raise me good give me love and keep me safe from harm. I wanted a mother, who’ll bounce me on her knee, And give me sweet candy and kisses. And when I’m away, on her mind I’ll stay, for it’s me she always misses. A Mother to shape and mold me to be all I can be. So when I’m older and out in the world I can make her proud of me. A Mother to teach me of kool-aid and Jesus, baseball and football too. A Mother that I can look at and say, I wanna be just like you. I’ve had lots of time to think about what I want to be. But I have the strangest feeling the worlds not ready for me. So I must go back to the heart of God and stay for a little while, But that’s ok for I have seen my dear sweet Mommas smile. In my minds I you kissed me but a moment, A lifetime in a flash. Although I knew you but a whisper, forever your memory will last.

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Date: 10/30/2013 7:36:00 PM
Poignantly written, yet it presents a subtle joyfulness.... Great writing. It peaked my interest from the start and held it with a firm grip... I love your style as presented in these first two posts.... I hope you post more..... Jake
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Date: 10/30/2013 7:30:00 PM
your poem is heartfelt... Kitty, thank you for both deep parts... luv~ LINDA
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