Busybee Me

(enjoy the puns) 

I happen to be a busy bee
always racing with time
since time how it flies for busy bees
Ah wish I could just lasso it
like a cowboy does his horse
and thereby bring it to a standstill! 

And if I don't waste this valuable Time
I think I could buy me some extra time
For time is money it's said
Ah wish I could just catch it
in a nook or a noose
as it flies by at will.

For at this rate the clock is ticking by
like some never exploding time-bomb
while I'm forever running out of time
so I wonder then how still
others just take their time
or be killing time coz they've time to kill! 

For I can't be killing this precious time
I don't have any spare time on my hands
And it is but challenging to make a chum
out of that swinging pendulum
Time is racing, it's outpacing
For me it seems time has never stood still.

Thus I'll merely have to resign to the fact
that I could never ever tie down mr. Time
for time and tide have waited for none
It's never going to cease, that monotonous chime
even when ceases to pen, a poet's quill

If the battery in thy clock stops
other clocks would be working timely still
So if you lag behind and don't make it in time
you can be sure there are others who will.

So I better let my time-old
venerable grandfather clock
go on with its carefree
dutiful but devil-may-care tick tock
Yah, let the time do the talk
and still tell it it's simply brill!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Deschler Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 5:01 PM
A very creative, unique and enjoyable poem filled with wisdom and rhyme ... So well done!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Oh what sublime puns! This poem is such a wonderful reflection of your amazing talent, my dear Zanab. Have a beautiful day! Best regards. Pandita
Scott Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 12:13 PM
I like some parts of this reminiscent to my poem time well said thankyou for your coments on my poem knowlge which I may well redit a bit as rushed to put on here not been on here for a while as been ill in hospital xx
Sands Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Very well written and thought provoking ! Time is precious. :)
Blanca Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 9:36 AM
The only person who saves time is the one who spends it well.
Kendrick Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Time is so valuable but it is spent unwisely so much..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
One Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 11:49 AM
This is an excellent piece of poetry..
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 11:58 PM
Thanx silent one. Cheers.
Rodd Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Wow! Isn't this the truth, chasing time and never having enough of it. Splendid poem!
Leong Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 3:33 AM
nice! i could picture clock after clock ticking away :) well written and absorbing too. cheers!
Kiser Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:01 AM
It is peculiar how time doesn't seem to move when you're watching the clock and it flies by way too fast when you're engaged in some pleasant endeavor; I wish I could lasso it, as well and make it last at least, another 12 hours a day. Great work.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:58 PM
very punny made me smile:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 4:21 PM
I'm back! You don't need to say: (enjoy the puns) because your readers will get them. "Mr.", not "mr.". I like your voice and what you have to say. It's modern and street. I'm, older(58) so i look to you to tell me what I don't know about the new world. If you're not sure of what you want your voice to sound like, I hope you're on your way. A poet's life is a never-ending one of study, reading and learning and striving to be better. I hope you never give up. Thanks for your time.
Schwartz Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Great Puns , it sounds like my life .. Sometimes I wish there were two of me ..
Tor Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 1:32 PM
The puns were great but the thoughts of time were cleverly thought. S. zaynab. Thought provoking take on time. Read it three times fully enjoyed.
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:34 AM
for sure, time waits for no one...you made the puns work wonders, zay!... greeat job... i like your comments on my poem.. huggs!
Borke Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Looking for the puns, I have buy/by spare/killing (spear) tied/tide. Am I missing any puns? My take on time is the opposite. The problem with time is that we don't get to kill enough of it. We work endlessly for sustenance and to set up for retirement, which would have been so enjoyable, would our bodies not be worn out.
Capitano Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Very punny indeed but time, or rather the lack of it, is not funny at all. We all fight that monster clock and few if any win.
Cozart Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Very clever.
Manassian Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Nice play with words here! :) I liked the lines: others just take their time or be killing time coz they've time to kill! Time is a precious precious commodity and sometimes we misuse is. Those who are wise in time management are those who are successful. Intriguing write!
Mccall Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:23 PM
What an amazing blank verse poem I enjoyed every verse every stanza it is definitely one for my favorites to be sure. You definitely have a wonderful way with words thank you for calling me to it have a blessed day.
Ashley Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Hi S. zaynab, I had the Time of my life reading your poem. The last stanza is my favorite. Brilliantly penned, I so enjoyed, and thanks for stopping by my page :)
Bateman Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 12:11 PM
S.Zaynab, This is a fabulous Blank Verse write. Ah--yes, the old "Time" variable. Time is integral to all we do in our lives. You've handled this walk-thru concerning time and its place in our lives very well. (Recommend, you take a quick read of two poems I've posted in the past that touch on "Time." One is "The Curve of Time," just posted recently and another earlier one called "Moments in God's Cosmic Time.") You might find these of interest. I really like your poem here. Best!!, Gary
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 11:51 AM
This was so fun to read! So many a delicious turn of phrase :) thank you for sharing this! xomo
Shaw Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 11:39 AM
"Ello" - Glad you asked me to pop in and check on your latest poem - "Wow" - It was as if "Time" grabbed me and took me for a ride - The flow - The motion took me faster as it went along till eventually I ended up in front of the "Old Grandfathers Clock and suddenly "Time" for me stood Still - Loved it - Indiana . . . : )
Hagy Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Great write S. ... Time is something that I think we cannot master, until we are out of time...then (as I believe) we won't even be aware of it:) I have a recent entry about time as well you may enjoy. Have great day
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