Busy In My Solitude

Taking a deep breath ..... i looked around....
There is a golden boundary... with lots of sound....

Why are they yelling.... I asked my self....
They need you ... what my heart compels....

Looking at them by clearing my eyes ...
I found they are the one's i needed once i realize...

For what they turned up i wonder....
Now i am obsessed i surrender...

when i needed them ....they were busy...
least bothered and had there own priorities..

Now when i learnt to be obsessed....
                           You call it an attitude....
please leave me alone ...
                           I am too busy in my solitude....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ao Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 12:07 AM
'Iam too busy in my solitude'...the ending line is so perfect.well done :)
Bhandula Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 1:01 AM
Thank you mam ... thnk u so much
Chakrapany Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 2:34 AM
nice poetic interpretations .thank you for sharing .jk
Bhandula Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 3:06 AM
thanks alot
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