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Scratchy, scratchy, what's that sound, Atop my home space, high and round? Could there be one self-served mouse, Schemed to steal my sweet, dry house? No, those sounds don't seem that soft, For some such small rodent, there aloft. Could be, large birds of prey thus wait, To bring me sure, their sweet, sad fate. Or maybe, through some so-bright sky, Dark clouds have come to weep and cry, Thus pattered, loud, my walls and roof, To make this day quite rummage-proof. Or maybe, perhaps - oh, please let it be - One bright red squirrel like me, but she? I'll listen and wait, and quite quietly hide, As my red squirrel heart beats fast inside. For all I can see through the door in my keg, Is paper and a puppy, and a little boy's leg, But a home is home, and I'll hold mine tight, Praying for a she-squirrel, wrong ... or write! Written and submitted on October 18, 2019 For the "Realism Art" Poetry Contest Eve Roper, Sponsor. ( I chose Norman Rockwell painting/illustration number two. "Write" in the last line is mis-spelled intentionally, as reference to the boy's activities )

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Date: 10/23/2019 12:43:00 PM
Hi Greg, Congratulations on your top win. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/23/2019 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg!
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Date: 10/21/2019 8:50:00 PM
This is a wonderful well written poem, Greg, I love that you took this photo to a different level . I would have never thought of writing on the view of a mouse... a fav. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/21/2019 7:55:00 PM
You really went to town on that painting with this creative description for it , Greg. Glad to see you with a gold star. Congrats, buddy.
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Date: 10/21/2019 12:18:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Greg. SO creative! Janice
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Date: 10/21/2019 2:12:00 AM
absolutely charming and I love the mis spelling of the final line:-) Many congrats on your top spot, hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/18/2019 6:28:00 PM
“like me, but she” adorableness throughout!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/19/2019 3:44:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, PS, I'm so pleased you liked it! :o) <3
Date: 10/18/2019 9:58:00 AM
Greg, Very nice poem. Good luck in the contest. -Richard
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/19/2019 3:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Richard - blessings to you! :o)

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