Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Busting Their Spleen

Everyone has a giggle trigger it seems
If you find it, just watch the happiness beam
Their smiles will be broad
Like a big old bullfrog
They'll wind up howling and busting their spleen


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman April 19, 2015 at 12:47 PM Giggle trigger? What do you mean?... That hilarious laughter that is so keen?... Or those rolling on the floor as they careen?... As they double over in laughter supreme?... Gee! Never heard of what you mean... Jack Ellison April 19, 2015 at 3:30 PM Cute eh!!! "Giggle trigger" You'll have to pay me if you want to use... but you dear Carol, I'll give you a special deal!!! LOL xxx

Laura Breidenthal April 19, 2015 at 2:01 AM They say laughter heals...a busted spleen does not sound very healing!! This one is really cute! Another great poem! Always, Laura Jack Ellison April 19, 2015 at 7:18 AM Imagine a world without laughter!!! I'd cash in my chips... ah... big talk... suicide's not an option! I'm a big scaredy cat!!! Love and big big hugs, Jacko xxx