Busses Rule

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The key to passion Is just this: There's NOTHING hotter Than a kiss Without it love Has little chance And nil, the hopes Of true romance If you're a lover End-to-start You know great kissing Can be an Art So hone your skills At joining lips It's MUCH more fun ... Than sinking ships!

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2017 9:17:00 PM

A fun one!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/31/2017 9:49:00 PM

Thank you, Kim - we can't be serious ALL the time, right? ;-) <3

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/31/2017 4:02:00 AM

You are a true romantic, my friend...whens the next bus leave lol...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/31/2017 9:48:00 PM

LOL - thank you so much, my friend, glad you enjoyed this! Time to catch the buss! ;-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/30/2017 10:21:00 PM

Loose lips do sink ships, but the best kiss sends you over the moon :) love your pen xomo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2017 10:25:00 PM

I love that, Maureen - very well and romantically said, My Friend! Thank you for your sweetness! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2017 9:05:00 PM

GREAT ending, hone those lips!! And you WILL sink some ships. Lovely poem.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2017 9:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea ... had fun with this one! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2017 9:04:00 PM

before I read, what is this smart food you mentioned?

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2017 9:14:00 PM

It's the best white cheddar popcorn, but there's not much that's "smart" about it, lol ... I crave it so much! (I'm eating it now!) ;-) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Smartfood