Busses Rule

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The key to passion

Is just this:

There's NOTHING hotter

Than a kiss

Without it love

Has little chance

And nil, the hopes

Of true romance

If you're a lover

End-to-start

You know great kissing

Can be an Art

So hone your skills

At joining lips

It's MUCH more fun ...

Than sinking ships!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/31/2017 9:17:00 PM
A fun one!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/31/2017 9:49:00 PM
Thank you, Kim - we can't be serious ALL the time, right? ;-) <3
Date: 7/31/2017 4:02:00 AM
You are a true romantic, my friend...whens the next bus leave lol...^WW^
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/31/2017 9:48:00 PM
LOL - thank you so much, my friend, glad you enjoyed this! Time to catch the buss! ;-)
Date: 7/30/2017 10:21:00 PM
Loose lips do sink ships, but the best kiss sends you over the moon :) love your pen xomo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2017 10:25:00 PM
I love that, Maureen - very well and romantically said, My Friend! Thank you for your sweetness! :-) <3
Date: 7/30/2017 9:05:00 PM
GREAT ending, hone those lips!! And you WILL sink some ships. Lovely poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2017 9:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea ... had fun with this one! :-)
Date: 7/30/2017 9:04:00 PM
before I read, what is this smart food you mentioned?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/30/2017 9:14:00 PM
It's the best white cheddar popcorn, but there's not much that's "smart" about it, lol ... I crave it so much! (I'm eating it now!) ;-) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Smartfood
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