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Business Haiku - Improvement and Reailty

Ideas for improvement. No one has bothered to listen. Winter of discontent. Slacker employees? They work hard. Push with Square Wheels. A Spring awakening? The landscape. No blame. Should have planned downhill journey. Thumping could be fixed. Are Bosses unaware? Square Wheels are always thumping. Listen. Small Improvements here. Wasting time you say. Boss will not make any improvement. Kick his butt downhill. Praise from boss for efforts. Way too much wasted energy. Push with more effort? With praise of boss for efforts. But too much wasted energy. Tender resignation… Dreams of improvement. Shattered by reality of being ignored. Square Wheels always thump. Things all built to last. Wagon is quite nicely made. Wheels must be improved. A wagon not empty. Round wheels are most abundant. Implement some now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/25/2014 10:38:00 AM
Scott, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/25/2014 7:29:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Scott - I choose your first great haiku poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2014 2:00:00 AM
interesting Haiku, Scott, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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