Bushido's Water Garden....

As water slowly falls onto
...tiered bamboo pipes,
like gently tipping levers
rhythmic sounds induce peace...

Light breeze astound the senses
aroused from scent of hyacinth,
wafted as a swath of silk,
caressing the skin serenely...
as purpose contemplated.
.....without distractions....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
July 20, 2008 at 1:28 PM
This sounds like a very peaceful and spiritual place - As always your writing inspires Jay - best wishes always
Sheart Avatar
July 19, 2008 at 10:32 AM
Hi Jay A beautiful magical visionary embrace, didn't want it to end. Read it twice , just to savour the moment! Beautiful....Have a wonderful weekend Jay. Love Light Truth Patricia
Reynolds Avatar
July 19, 2008 at 10:00 AM
Ahhhh...beautiful. This took me away for a moment and held me gently within its beauty...lovely, Jay - love Kristin
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