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Bushido's Water Garden....

As water slowly falls onto ...tiered bamboo pipes, like gently tipping levers rhythmic sounds induce peace... Light breeze astound the senses aroused from scent of hyacinth, wafted as a swath of silk, caressing the skin serenely... as purpose contemplated. .....without distractions....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/20/2008 1:28:00 PM
This sounds like a very peaceful and spiritual place - As always your writing inspires Jay - best wishes always
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Date: 7/19/2008 10:32:00 AM
Hi Jay A beautiful magical visionary embrace, didn't want it to end. Read it twice , just to savour the moment! Beautiful....Have a wonderful weekend Jay. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/19/2008 10:00:00 AM
Ahhhh...beautiful. This took me away for a moment and held me gently within its beauty...lovely, Jay - love Kristin
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