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Bus Sun Tran As i was waiting for the bus i soon discovered the bus comes when it wants to not when i want a bus it is under the drivers rule not mine i can never call it quickly but i soon discover that i am a salmon swimming upstream leaning to the upper water to catch the warmth of the sun avoiding capture as i swim in the river the bear tries to paw me up and out of the river into its waiting Jaws all aboard

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Date: 2/20/2009 10:01:00 AM
very nice, great visuals, good personification..how about doing me a talking bus seat for the Chair Tales contest? Light & Love Debbie
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