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Bus Stop

I saw her standing at the 4th st. bus stop Chewing on gum Chew, Snap, Pop.. She checked her watch. not once, but twice. Cute face, tight jeans, nice butt, how nice I watched her from a distance. to see if she needed a ride. I thought, she's the kind of girl I'd like to have by my side I asked her if she needed a ride, since the bus was running late She said, that would be nice. I have an important business date. How great She said her name was Sydney. I told her mine as well We rapped for a while. I dropped her off, We made plans for a date. Swell Dinner was great, the alcohol was kickin', and the sex was even better I awoke to find her gone and in my hand, a letter I opened the letter, read a few lines. some of it I didn't understand But what caught my eyes were the words..I'm really a MAN I couldn't believe it. how could I be so dumb. She insisted we do it in the dark.. there will be no more pick-ups at the bus stop. Maybe I'll try the park. Carron carter-original

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Date: 8/31/2015 3:25:00 AM
- A great poem, Carron ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2015 2:43:00 AM
Hi Carron, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/28/2015 6:56:00 PM
Carron, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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