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Burst Into Flames

You told me when I stepped into your bad dreams that cloudy day, you were on a midnight bullet flight to Phoenix from L.A. Smoking barrel infidelity blues was the red-eye, insomnia jet lag that had you on a pillow cry toss-n-turn night You said all your tear ashes had fallen out of a love be-tray So you were moving into the desert to get far, far ... Cold feelings faraway We spoke gaze intense, of so many stranger things But the spark that lit your damp eyes was my exotic flame, cactus-shaped heart burning You got so sky-high curious, instantly ... Demurely saying my half-finished, gypsy story was so Prince Charming to ear read As all of your scarlet-hair, corralled desires broke loose bosom mustang untamed Your aroused heart rubbed next to mine, and passion sparks burst into flames The fiery color of your cerebral glow filly mane had me first date blinded With starry eyes, we torch burn fell head-over-heels at the scorched touch beginning And you loved the Indie speed of the desert fox chase nitro-turbo accelerating Shifting bio-rhythm gears ... adjusting to the carotid flow change, you let me slow pulse merge into your lip fast lane Then at crescent moon nightfall, when it’s the best twilight time to crash ... To walk away from the wreckage of the past We vowed to get buried together with the same name ... Thus, the smiling other half of our bohemian love story dreamily unfolds in a fiery rainbow: Free of former accusations, no shame ... no blame My burning cactus heart touched your unfulfilled, thirsting desire And you stepped into the fire ... casting aside your rightful, maiden claims Now we lay always in a bed of passion pyre Having tears of joy pumping thru our vow veins, our hearts keep blink bursting into liquid flames Love fever cold sweat of golden ecstasy skin rain Lava kisses pleasure pouring onto the desert oasis plain With gaze smouldering yawns at every dawn, we Phoenix love rise again, and again And twin again and again and again ... from the sensuous ember ashes of each nightly burning

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Date: 12/23/2018 5:21:00 AM
Love the Phoenix connection and this story is amazing in its language and tone. Great descriptions ~ "burning cactus heart" - love it. Have a great one my friend.
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:09:00 AM
Freddie, Your creativity shines so brightly!!! Your romanticism is absolutely Marvelous.. Had me in suspense as to what would unfold next.. You penned an excellent write, my friend.. Many blessings and Happy Holidays!!
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Date: 12/2/2018 4:03:00 AM
Amazing work Freddie. So many memorable lines. Thank you for sharing your great gift!
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Date: 12/1/2018 9:47:00 AM
Wow Freddie. You have gone all out with this wonderful, exciting poem! Well written and powerful :)
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