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unrhymed tercets saying it how i see something happening the downfall of man is unforgiving 

Darkness you have a funny way of shading the light colour coding from such a pit spinning the web of deceit clouds within suffering victims cry to the heaven's Shame on such corrupt souls poisoned by lies twisting truth shows bad manners condemning justice to speak correctly false faced inside forked tongues Where the poor are heavily burdened inside such greed values no longer hold the ground to address this shift backwards principles are darned from the fabric sewn into morality Backwards thinking science crosses a great divide in society slavery is rising fast where the toils of labour have been reduced to crusts little crumbs are being swept away like worthless pieces of dust

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Date: 6/8/2018 12:44:00 PM
Hello Liam, your title fits the poem. I find it to be very sad. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/28/2018 4:37:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! Congratulations are in order here on POTD!! Very well-done my good friend. You've touched on some very poignant things regarding the downfall of man. A very powerful and meaningful write indeed. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 5/26/2018 11:40:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Liam..
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Date: 5/24/2018 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations my dearest friend! You deseve it!
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Date: 5/23/2018 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! An awesome write. Check soupmail plz.
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Date: 5/23/2018 1:22:00 PM
- Congratulations, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/23/2018 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, liam, very deep write :)
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Date: 5/23/2018 6:15:00 AM
Congrats liam on poem of the day. Your opening line sets the stage, shading the light, for the insights you present in this poem. Well done!
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Date: 5/23/2018 6:08:00 AM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow!A very huge congratulations on POTD! Well, very much well deserved my dearest friend Liam.Just awesome! Well done!I'm so very happy for you.Enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 5/23/2018 4:56:00 AM
Congrats!!! Liam on your POTD...well executed my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 5/23/2018 4:14:00 AM
A relevant and gritty challenge to where we find ourselves. Thanks Liam.
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Date: 5/22/2018 3:02:00 PM
- Greed and falsity have many faces, Liam - A powerful poem with truth and feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2018 9:03:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! A very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very heartfelt!This world is all upside down as we know by now.It breaks my heart to see all terrible things happening all over.All signs of the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray now to God more than ever for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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