unrhymed tercets saying it how i see something happening the downfall of man is unforgiving
Darkness you have a funny way of shading the light colour coding from such a pit spinning the web of deceit clouds within suffering victims cry to the heaven's Shame on such corrupt souls poisoned by lies twisting truth shows bad manners condemning justice to speak correctly false faced inside forked tongues Where the poor are heavily burdened inside such greed values no longer hold the ground to address this shift backwards principles are darned from the fabric sewn into morality Backwards thinking science crosses a great divide in society slavery is rising fast where the toils of labour have been reduced to crusts little crumbs are being swept away like worthless pieces of dust
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