Burnt Offerings

Rain falls silently beyond the farthest hill
as morning cries from life's night of despair
Where shaded shadows stand in solitude seeking wisdom
after stars fell without notice by human eyes
corrupted by caustic cradles of candles waxing

Searching for answers in skies where there is no sun
and finding weakness wandering to wailing walls
because all are lost from reason and sanity
infused instead by illusions of light lit longingly in wistfulness

As anger confronts confusion leading to the death of all
left to be buried by no one but the passing of time
that cares not whether we pass this way again
   Maybe another candle will be lit

8/30/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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August 30, 2020 at 7:10 PM
So ch a masterful and melancholy poem, of epic proportions, Frederic! I am going intrigued by your message, and attempting to interpret..great write and a fave! :)
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