Burnout

There was an electrician from Nashes Who worked in darts and dashes. One day especially rushed Against 240 volts he brushed. Now Nashes is home to his ashes.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2015 9:07:00 PM

you are SO good at these, Paul. I really like this one. WEll, I came back here to your very first limerick to thank you for the several beautiful comments you made on poems of mine today. I appreciate it so much. I am rushing tonight to catch up on some other comments, but will be back another time to see more of your poetry!

Deb Wilson

Date: 1/2/2015 11:40:00 PM

this made me chuckle right out loud Paul ! HUGS, Deb

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/2/2015 11:45:00 PM

Many thanks, Deb. I'm pleased that I was able to give you a laugh.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 4:57:00 PM

oh dear! - great humour here Paul hugs Jan xxx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/2/2015 6:26:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Your kind comments help me to face a blank computer monitor screen.