Burnout

There was an electrician from Nashes
Who worked in darts and dashes.
One day especially rushed
Against 240 volts he brushed.
Now Nashes is home to his ashes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 9:07 PM
you are SO good at these, Paul. I really like this one. WEll, I came back here to your very first limerick to thank you for the several beautiful comments you made on poems of mine today. I appreciate it so much. I am rushing tonight to catch up on some other comments, but will be back another time to see more of your poetry!
Wilson Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:40 PM
this made me chuckle right out loud Paul ! HUGS, Deb
Schneiter Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Many thanks, Deb. I'm pleased that I was able to give you a laugh.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:57 PM
oh dear! - great humour here Paul hugs Jan xxx
Schneiter Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Thank you, Jan. Your kind comments help me to face a blank computer monitor screen.
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