- Burning With Love -

Falling, laughing orange sunshine
   Warmly comforting beams caress
   I was blinded for a moment
   Lost searching faraway grace
   A color the Angels have ordained ?
   Butterflies dancing on each heartbeat
   I have to feel your tender touch
   Cotton fingertips electric sparks embrace
   The days they pass so quickly now
   Watching night and day pass 
   The splendid color of the sky
   Heavens purity through lens of one soul
   A blazing light upon the shores
   Golden treasure your light shines 
   All of God's creation, painted with his brush
   Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise
   Of life, that seems almost too much
   Far beyond our human brain to explain
   Somewhere very near, just around the corner
   Hope dances with the never ending dream





   Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  11.09.2015 
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Kruger Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 6:01 AM
Your poetry are so visual and descriptive. Love it.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 11:49 AM
- Thanks Neil, for the visit and comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 7, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Lightened up this dull day with this poem. Fall is coming fast and the leaves are just about gone from the trees. Winter is not far behind. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 2:35 PM
- Autumn always comes too quickly :))) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments,Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leake Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Great imagery Anne, Loved that line All of God's creation, painted with his brush!!! Brilliant Kevin
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September 14, 2015 at 1:44 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 5:52 PM
wow, the imagery is spectacular in this one. A big SEVEN
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 3:15 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Skelly Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 1:58 PM
A lovely collaboration. The last two lines: Somewhere very near, just around the corner Hope dances with the never ending dream. This image is a perfect conclusion to poem~Delice
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 2:12 PM
- Always enjoyable with positive feedback, Delice :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Anne-Lise, beautifully penned by two wonderful poets 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, father ~~
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September 13, 2015 at 1:51 PM
- Burning With Love - a poem that I share with pleasure - Thanks for visiting and comments, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 11:06 AM
a rainy sunday here, anne... thanks for your feedback about my previous work!...huggs
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 1:23 PM
- A gray and rainy Sunday here too - I wish you a wonderful new week, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 9:52 PM
A nice cheerful poem here! Great images! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 4:31 AM
- Thanks Matthew, for the visit and comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 5:51 PM
A fabulous collaboration A-L and Liam....you two write so well together.
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 4:28 AM
- Nice to share with you, Tim - Thanks for visiting and comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 4:27 PM
I have said it before...you two write seamlessly! This poem is proof of that. Love and hope compliment one another. #7 // paul
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September 13, 2015 at 4:27 AM
- Thank you for always beautiful words a 7, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Anne Lise and Liam you have such a marvelous chemistry when you write - yet another golden poem flows from your pens:-) hugs jan xx 7
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Don't I know it!!!! hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 4:25 AM
- Having a great "writing partner" means a lot :) - Jan, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 12, 2015 at 3:05 PM
Yes, no human brain 100% true and He knows His magic how He has done with His what brush. Beautiful poem read from you my lovely lovely friend. 7 sure. Loved always, bl
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September 13, 2015 at 4:23 AM
- Dear friend Bl, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 12, 2015 at 12:08 PM
Anne-Lise,You and Liam have penned another beautiful work of art:-)Alexis
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September 12, 2015 at 1:07 PM
- Alexis, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 12, 2015 at 10:22 AM
Love this collaboration Anne Lise ! I love these serene writes...have a wonderful weekend dear poet...much love, james
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September 12, 2015 at 11:44 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, James :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 12, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Great descriptive lines within..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 9:03 AM
- Sara, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:38 AM
You two write so well together. Bravo!
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:43 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Richard :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 12, 2015 at 4:34 AM
Sparkling poetry that enchants the eyes! A seven to each, dear Anne- Lise!
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September 12, 2015 at 8:43 AM
- Dear friend Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 12, 2015 at 2:30 AM
such a delightful write that celebrates life, anne.. yo and liam are unstoppable... happy saturday; still having TPS error .. huggs
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September 12, 2015 at 8:42 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 11, 2015 at 4:37 PM
Hi Ann Lise n' Liam! Wow! A most beautiful, romantic and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it. A true golden gem!Just awesome!A very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful.I love it! Very enchanting.Great imagery! Excellent collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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September 12, 2015 at 8:41 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Dorian :) - Best wishes for the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 11, 2015 at 3:29 PM
this holds me your words sang golden thank always a pleasure sharing pens wishing you a blessed evening
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 3:37 PM
- Golden treasure your words shines always, thanks my friend :) - Blessed evening to you as well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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