Burning the Bonfire

A parched land, thirsty bird, worn wild, hungry beggar,
This heart of mine yearns and pines for something better;
Fresh orchids, love birds, content wild, happy humans,
Yet, in such paradise, would one find no nuance?

An empty space is void, indeed, physically,
It's blue-black-space contained in all - mystically;
It's 'dark night of the soul' psychologically,
It's salvation par excellence - religiously...

This is no pessimism nor nude rude negation,
It's, for me, a search for meaning -truth probation;
Like the parrot pecks the mango's interiors,
Yet not intending to hurt its exteriors...

It's not seeing gloomy dead darkness in the tomb,
It's witnessing a precious soul in the tomb's womb;
It's the holiness of the highest form and state,
It's nothing determined by the hate-bait of fate...

Void, sometimes, like the death-filled fearful mind of threat,
That, like nightmares or phantoms, do great frights beget;
Absurdity and nothingness when poison lit,
Its purity gets aborted; its throat gets slit...

Void is subtle and needs to be handled with care,
It's like burning the bonfire yet not getting flare;
If we learn to see void like our marriage banquet,
We'll be blissful! Not spiritually bankrupt!


"Empty yourself to fill the void with love (Debasish Mridha)


10 August 2021
The Void Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker
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Agustin Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:17 PM
Wow! Congrats! I'm delighted with your last line: "We'll be blissful! Not spiritually bankrupt!" Such for me is very possible with our personal relationship with the Lord... which we can share with others. God bless you. Thanks for constantly cheering through your uplifting comments. God bless you.
Sambourne Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Well expressed, Christuraj. Congratulations! "To learn to see the void..." a challenge for all of us. Best wishes, Brian
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:45 PM
Thank you very much.
Gaul Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Much mindful language sung throughout your sentient song of alliteration and rhyme are highlighted with wisdom of all the spiritual sages. This is so well penned, so filled with little lessons for us all in this deep reading. Congratulations on your win.
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:44 PM
Thank you very much.
Kauffman Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Amazing Chris. Each stanza is filled with gems of imagery and poetic expressions - "void is subtle," "handled with care." Visceral and vivid! Congratulations on your win!
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Thank you very much.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Christuraj very well expressed!! great poem!! congrats on your win!!
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:01 AM
Back with congrats on your well deserved win.
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you very much. Thank you for your great suggestion about changing the title.
Seeker Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:01 AM
An amazing write, Chris! Truly enjoyed dwelling upon your deep insights. Congrats on your win!
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 12:46 AM
I used to be like you. Now after I write, I read the rules and poems min 4 times. I find mistakes and correct them. If you're determined, your mistakes will reduce. I learned a lot from repeated mistakes. Now they have reduced, not ended. Worse part is writing for contest and forgetting to submit. I run my poems through grammar checker.
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 2:37 AM
Thank you very much. I shall try my best.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Superb! The quote in end is awesome. All the best for contest. Again you have to change title. Void not allowed
Alex Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 7:49 PM
Thank you very much. See, this is my problem.
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