Burning the Bonfire

A parched land, thirsty bird, worn wild, hungry beggar,
This heart of mine yearns and pines for something better;
Fresh orchids, love birds, content wild, happy humans,
Yet, in such paradise, would one find no nuance?

An empty space is void, indeed, physically,
It's blue-black-space contained in all - mystically;
It's 'dark night of the soul' psychologically,
It's salvation par excellence - religiously...

This is no pessimism nor nude rude negation,
It's, for me, a search for meaning -truth probation;
Like the parrot pecks the mango's interiors,
Yet not intending to hurt its exteriors...

It's not seeing gloomy dead darkness in the tomb,
It's witnessing a precious soul in the tomb's womb;
It's the holiness of the highest form and state,
It's nothing determined by the hate-bait of fate...

Void, sometimes, like the death-filled fearful mind of threat,
That, like nightmares or phantoms, do great frights beget;
Absurdity and nothingness when poison lit,
Its purity gets aborted; its throat gets slit...

Void is subtle and needs to be handled with care,
It's like burning the bonfire yet not getting flare;
If we learn to see void like our marriage banquet,
We'll be blissful! Not spiritually bankrupt!


"Empty yourself to fill the void with love (Debasish Mridha)


10 August 2021
The Void Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/12/2021 10:17:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! I'm delighted with your last line: "We'll be blissful! Not spiritually bankrupt!" Such for me is very possible with our personal relationship with the Lord... which we can share with others. God bless you. Thanks for constantly cheering through your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 8/11/2021 1:38:00 PM
Well expressed, Christuraj. Congratulations! "To learn to see the void..." a challenge for all of us. Best wishes, Brian
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 11:45:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/11/2021 1:23:00 PM
Much mindful language sung throughout your sentient song of alliteration and rhyme are highlighted with wisdom of all the spiritual sages. This is so well penned, so filled with little lessons for us all in this deep reading. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/11/2021 11:44:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/11/2021 9:49:00 AM
Amazing Chris. Each stanza is filled with gems of imagery and poetic expressions - "void is subtle," "handled with care." Visceral and vivid! Congratulations on your win!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 11:03:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/11/2021 7:50:00 AM
Christuraj very well expressed!! great poem!! congrats on your win!!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/11/2021 5:01:00 AM
Back with congrats on your well deserved win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you very much. Thank you for your great suggestion about changing the title.
Date: 8/11/2021 5:01:00 AM
An amazing write, Chris! Truly enjoyed dwelling upon your deep insights. Congrats on your win!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity.
Date: 8/11/2021 12:46:00 AM
I used to be like you. Now after I write, I read the rules and poems min 4 times. I find mistakes and correct them. If you're determined, your mistakes will reduce. I learned a lot from repeated mistakes. Now they have reduced, not ended. Worse part is writing for contest and forgetting to submit. I run my poems through grammar checker.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/11/2021 2:37:00 AM
Thank you very much. I shall try my best.
Date: 8/10/2021 11:20:00 AM
Superb! The quote in end is awesome. All the best for contest. Again you have to change title. Void not allowed
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/10/2021 7:49:00 PM
Thank you very much. See, this is my problem.
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