Burning Soul

SOMETHING BURNS INSIDE MY CHEST
 BILE RISES IN MY THROAT
 I MISS THOSE KISSES
 I MISS THOSE HUGS
 I MISS MY LOVE

SOMETHING BURNS INSIDE MY CHEST
 BILE RISES IN MY THROAT
 WHEN I SEE LOVERS ON STREET
 MY EYES FEEL COLD
 I LOOK DOWN AND TURN AROUND
 TO LET MY TEARS FALL

SOMETHING BURNS INSIDE MY CHEST
 BILE RISES IN MY THROAT
 FISTS PUSH MY POCKETS DOWN
 WITH SHOULDERS SHRUGGED ALONG
 I WALK EMPTY STREETS ALONE AT NIGHT
 TO TALK WITH PAGAN GOD

SOMETHING BURNS INSIDE MY CHEST
 BILE RISES IN MY THROAT
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June 17, 2013 at 3:41 AM
- Hello Shadab - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 16, 2013 at 6:56 PM
Hi Shadab, a very deep poem, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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June 16, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Thank you for the appreciation and admiration. :)
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June 16, 2013 at 6:07 PM
Shadab,. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
Shaikh Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 8:52 PM
Thank you for the invitation. I will take a tour.
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