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Burning Out

Burning fast and high, but not for long Flickering away without a final song Burns so so bright, but its gone so fast Disappearing is a second, only embers last The embers linger, a reminder of what was But in the end they're gone, no matter what one does

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/16/2018 11:20:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Mermaid Girl. "Burns so bright, but its gone so fast," so true! Well penned, my friend.
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Date: 8/29/2018 9:13:00 PM
Awesome. Welcome to Poetry Soup, mermaid girl.
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Date: 8/29/2018 8:36:00 PM
This resonated with me as heartbreak. I really enjoyed your writing. "Burns so so bright, but its gone so fast" this line especially. :)
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