Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Burning Love Take Hold

I would like slipping  very far away
Where all is quiet and no one speaking
Maybe I'll slip away during day
Upon very loud train with horn shrieking

From the closed window I'll wave goodbye
On this trip I'll spend all day dreaming
In a glass car enjoy visions of sky
And listen to rhythm of engine streaming

Excitedly listen as the wheels nosily make
Clickety-clack sounds and in my heart knowing
Within my being burning love soon will take;
This love reaching deeper as farther away going.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 5, 2011 at 4:57 AM Special words of poetry in this piece Sara .. grand expression of imagery and passion at the same time.. enjoyed with luv..

Kacey Greenlee March 4, 2011 at 6:12 PM GREAT.HANDS DOWN!THANKS FOR FEED ON MY OWN WORK,ALWAYS LIKE TO HEAR HOW I'M DOING...

Doris Culverhouse March 4, 2011 at 1:01 PM but would it be nice to go for a few days?? do you want me and you to go?? alone??

Carol Sunshine Brown March 4, 2011 at 12:50 PM The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Sara. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol

Roger Byrd March 4, 2011 at 12:23 PM Thank you for your comment, I like this your a really talented writer,

Carolyn Devonshire March 4, 2011 at 11:18 AM The farther away we are from our loved ones, the more we miss them, Sara. Enjoyed taking this ride with you! Love, Carolyn