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Burning Love Take Hold

I would like slipping very far away Where all is quiet and no one speaking Maybe I'll slip away during day Upon very loud train with horn shrieking From the closed window I'll wave goodbye On this trip I'll spend all day dreaming In a glass car enjoy visions of sky And listen to rhythm of engine streaming Excitedly listen as the wheels nosily make Clickety-clack sounds and in my heart knowing Within my being burning love soon will take; This love reaching deeper as farther away going.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/5/2011 4:57:00 AM
Special words of poetry in this piece Sara .. grand expression of imagery and passion at the same time.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:12:00 PM
GREAT.HANDS DOWN!THANKS FOR FEED ON MY OWN WORK,ALWAYS LIKE TO HEAR HOW I'M DOING...
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Date: 3/4/2011 1:01:00 PM
but would it be nice to go for a few days?? do you want me and you to go?? alone??
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:50:00 PM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Sara. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:23:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, I like this your a really talented writer,
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:18:00 AM
The farther away we are from our loved ones, the more we miss them, Sara. Enjoyed taking this ride with you! Love, Carolyn
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