Burning Love

My heart is aflame with a burning desire
You are the one who has awoken this fire
I've felt this passion right from the start
My love for you comes straight from the heart

Loves butterflies lead us into a slow dance
Moonlight and stars endorse our romance
I close my eyes but I can still see
The beauty of the woman who now kisses me.  

Never in my life have I felt this way before
Our eyes lock when you walk through the door
Thought love at first sight was confined to dreams
You are the love of my life forever it seems

Laid on the sofa you yield to my caress
Expert fingers slowly remove your dress
Forever I'll remember this wonderful moment in time 
The consummation of true love when two hearts entwined.

When I’m lying in your arms all I want is you
Making sweet love is all we want to do
Our bodies entwined for all eternity
Together forever is how we will always be

Written by Jan Allison & Darren Watson
23rd May 2014

Submitted to PD's contest Your Best Love Poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 28, 2014 at 12:10 PM
LOL, Jan your comment on my comment has me chuckling... hahaha... I don't like sharing, at all......LOL..... He's your CB-Hubby, and I will respect that... However, I want you and CB-Hubby to think about this... A THREE WAY COLLABORATION..... I think we can pull it off,.... What do you think? Ask Darren, and let me know... Linda
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May 28, 2014 at 7:22 PM
oi! Oi! Oi!...
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May 28, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Oh I'm sure Darren would be up for a threesome he's a very naughty boy lol (blushes) I'm always getting ravished in our poems lol I think this could be so so so interesting Linda. We will be in touch - oh I can't stop laughing now you have made my day my week my month lol. hugs Jan xx
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May 27, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Hi Jan, i like how much fun you are having with this site.. Maybe one day, I'll join the fun...Linda
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May 28, 2014 at 1:46 AM
I do hope you take the plunge and write with Darren. Long as you return my 'cyber hubby' back to me I wont mind LOL. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 27, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Just beautiful - Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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May 27, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Pandita. hugs Jan xxx
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May 27, 2014 at 2:40 AM
Beautiful poem, Jan. Many Congrat's Lainie
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May 27, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Thanks for dropping by Elaine. Hugs Jan xx
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May 26, 2014 at 9:58 PM
JADAZZLE,, Congratulations, thank you for the support. Enjoy my blog "Four Letter Words." if you like or have the time.. ((THIS IS A SWEET POEM ON LOVE)) Good night.... XOX~ LINDA
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May 27, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Thanks for running the contests Linda we do so enjoy writing together and this was a great contest for us to enter. Hugs Jan xx
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May 26, 2014 at 7:36 AM
great write you two,love the flow,love the love,go get em guys
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May 26, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Thanks Richard. I adore working with Darren our writing just flows verse by verse in complete harmony. I am so honoured he has agreed to work with me and he has become a very special friend. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 23, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Lovely and it is very romantic ^__^
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May 23, 2014 at 3:23 PM
Thanks for dropping by Doris. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 23, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Quite beautiful and romantic... Your love is getting stronger... Hugs Tim
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May 23, 2014 at 9:05 AM
It's written purely for PD's contest Tim, thanks for dropping by. Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxx
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