Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Burning Flesh Part 2

The angelic answer of the Almighty Lord comes swiftly 

As Archangels Michael and Gabriel with their Band of 
Burning Flesh - The Devil’s own

Angels enters the earthly plane to confront the Hellfire
vengeance of The Devil and His Dragon as they reap and
sow their evil upon mankind, and with a sudden determined
fury Michael does fatally smote The Devil’s Dragon
while lopping its head off and sending its soul back to Hell 
while Gabriel banishes the demon forces waving his wand! 

With all this Lucifer knows with all due certainty that He 
must return and rejoin His evil minions who lurk in the 
infernal regions of the Earth, knowing that he’s lost once
more to the Almighty Lord in another struggle of Good 
versus Evil and has now been deprived of his most 
prized pawn of death and destruction—His very own
Dragon whose blackened soul suffers now forever in Hell
And can never be reincarnated again in its bodily form!        

Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman – A Collaborated Poem, 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (November 28, 2014)
(Free Verse poetic format)

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Timothy Hicks December 1, 2014 at 9:35 PM And the devil gets his just desserts. I was taken back to Christian's battle against Appollyon, in Pilgrim's Progress. Like Dorian said, you held nothing back in this one, and both of you went clear through to the end.

Dorian Petersen Potter November 29, 2014 at 2:17 PM Wow! this is a very dark and scary tale woven here my dear Liam between you and Gary. Satan and all that you two surely went all the way to the end with this one. Good V.S. Evil. So happy to read that good won in the end over evil and defeated evil and the darkness, and satan. lol... Excellent collaboration! A 7 from me to you Liam and another for Gary. Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Nette Onclaud November 28, 2014 at 6:10 PM triumph of goodness never fails.. glorious story heavenly told, liam.. love angels!;;; huggs Liam Mcdaid November 29, 2014 at 7:48 AM so true in the end nette love with the angels house the brightest light wonderful comment dear friend bless you

Eileen Manassian November 28, 2014 at 2:09 PM Victory of truth over evil....always a lovely ending. Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2014 at 2:19 PM the truth always shines a light in the end eileen wonderful comment pal heartfelt appreciated dear friend have a great weekend

Richard Lamoureux November 28, 2014 at 12:35 PM A very powerful collaboration! I enjoyed both parts. Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2014 at 12:51 PM richard dear pal truly wonderful comment you and your family have a blessed beautiful weekend

Brenda Meier-Hans November 28, 2014 at 10:44 AM Great collaboration Liam and Gary. Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2014 at 12:50 PM brenda wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated wishing you a great weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2014 at 7:33 AM - Woow ....once more ...... I have never portrayed evil, because I have never met such a great and evil force - but, we see and hear about it every day (even if it is not dragons .... . or maybe they are) - But I think ultimately that goodness will win over Evil - A really fantastic writing from both of you - (A "7" so clearly) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2014 at 12:48 PM oh evil is all around us anne lise strikes when you least expect it so many faces who play games at the hearts expense found this out the hard way myself good always wins in the end as love will always be a champion over hate a dazzling beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2014 at 12:38 PM there could be a whole saga yet mike oh the leprechaun tips his hat the gold just falls out in your wonderful comment bless you buddy gary will be delighted