Burning Embers

Alive are my embers Alive in great numbers Taking life from my dreams Those irreal ones, so it seems Yet, their motto is to burn and to flare Even when without an ounce of air Having their basis in hope They make me climb every slope A dream or a sign To discard, I would never deign! A mystery brought forth in a temple When misery and despair came in ample! Alive are still my embers A decade later life still clambers Yet, as long as I breathe and write My embers shall bring me to my light
Anoucheka Gangabissoon For the contest Burning Embers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gangabissoon Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 9:16 PM
Thks you everyone for your warm congrats and your support thks :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:21 PM
wow, I can see how this got a number one placement. It was a little different than the others and I love the slant you took with yours. Congrats on this one!!
Gangabissoon Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 9:16 PM
Thks :) Congrats to you as well
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Andrea I love your penned words in this poem I can see where you placed #1. Well deserved my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 12:37 AM
Hi what a lovely write and well deserving of a top spot..xx
Johnson Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 11:24 PM
Congratulations on your work and your win. Love, Joyce
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:08 PM
A very deserving win...congratulatioms
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Lovely poem...congratulations on your wonderful well deserved win!
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Anoucheka, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD
Squyres Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 5:04 PM
What a lovely poem...embers of hope that never die out !! Congrats on your win !!
Jones Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 5:08 PM
Beautifully written
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