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Burning Embers

Alive are my embers Alive in great numbers Taking life from my dreams Those irreal ones, so it seems Yet, their motto is to burn and to flare Even when without an ounce of air Having their basis in hope They make me climb every slope A dream or a sign To discard, I would never deign! A mystery brought forth in a temple When misery and despair came in ample! Alive are still my embers A decade later life still clambers Yet, as long as I breathe and write My embers shall bring me to my light
Anoucheka Gangabissoon For the contest Burning Embers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2013 9:16:00 PM
Thks you everyone for your warm congrats and your support thks :)
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:21:00 PM
wow, I can see how this got a number one placement. It was a little different than the others and I love the slant you took with yours. Congrats on this one!!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/22/2013 9:16:00 PM
Thks :) Congrats to you as well
Date: 2/22/2013 7:55:00 AM
Andrea I love your penned words in this poem I can see where you placed #1. Well deserved my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:37:00 AM
Hi what a lovely write and well deserving of a top spot..xx
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Date: 2/21/2013 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your work and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:08:00 PM
A very deserving win...congratulatioms
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:27:00 PM
Lovely poem...congratulations on your wonderful well deserved win!
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:09:00 PM
Anoucheka, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:04:00 PM
What a lovely poem...embers of hope that never die out !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 2/10/2013 5:08:00 PM
Beautifully written
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