Burning Embers

B urning embers growing dim
U sually would be suggesting
R esulting love affair diminishing
N ot in this case, the embers are making
I nteresting visions of love with their coals
N ow love is deep within their souls
G oing from strength to strength with no control

E ndless nights of breathless moaning deep
M aking love until saturated, too tired to sleep
B ecoming as one in mind and soul
E ntwined forever in lust and love, now are whole
R esulting in two becoming one
S ensually and sexually the battle for love is won

EMBERS BURNING BRIGHTLY FOREVER.


Penned by Seren Roberts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations to you Seren. A wonderful poem of passionate love.
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Thanks Andrea ....Seren
M V Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on your great win in the contest,Serene
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:23 PM
Hello Fabiyas and thank you....Seren
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February 22, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win. Connie
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Thanks Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 12:48 AM
Hi congratulations Seren , I really like this one, and it is well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:25 PM
Thanks Mandy, that will be nice for you to have more time with us again...Seren
Johnson Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 11:59 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win Seren. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:26 PM
Thank you Joyce you are kind ...Seren
May Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 7:15 PM
congrats on a fine win Seren
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 10:21 PM
Thank you Joseph
Squyres Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 5:43 PM
Beautiful, sensual and full of Love !! Enjoyed the read. Congrats on your win.
Roberts Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:28 PM
Thanks Debra......Seren
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February 21, 2013 at 5:11 PM
Seren, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD
Roberts Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Thank you P.D. ....Seren
Carrillo Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 12:50 AM
This is one great beautiful poem. You did a perfect job on it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Roberts Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Thank you Lucilla
Sivey Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 12:19 PM
This is a brilliant write, a truly immaculate write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! This acrostic fits the contest perfectly Seren! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Thank you once again Russell...Seren
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February 3, 2013 at 9:45 AM
A very steamy write, Seren! Is it hot in here or is it just me? Where's a fan when you need one? lol This is really good Seren. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 12:58 PM
HaHa Will send a bucket of ice over....Seren
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