Burning Desire

This desire has me aflame
Seeking your lips to taste mine
Melt me with your burning touch
My heart is on fire!







** for "Spicy(ladies only)" contest
 sponsored by Michael Falotico
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ruebel Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win in the contest, this is wonderful! As Always, Shar
A   Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:51 PM
A late Congratulation~ on your #1 win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.
Laan Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Wonderful win:))
Brown Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations Deb, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on your win Deb. How many alarms?
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:19 PM
VERY cool (in a hot way!) Congratulations, Deb! Luv, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 9:27 AM
all heated up with best CHEERS for high win, deb...:) huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations with this passionate write Deb, love Wilma
Richards Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations Deb !! Well done! ~ Carrie
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:03 AM
Congrats Deb on your first place win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and entry luv..
Falotico Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 5:53 AM
Congrats Deb on your 1st place win!!! luv Michael
Calhoun Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 5:52 AM
Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC
Mehta Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 6:01 PM
heart on fire and melting with the burning touch... nice expression. Good luck, Deb
Sweetheart Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:13 PM
thankxxx for supporting our co sponsored contest Deb.. know Michael will luv this piece and we will be judging together so good luck my friend.. with luv.. HNY EVE....
Kendrick Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Good luck in the contest with this one..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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