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Burning Candle

Burning candle
tells a tale of
pure selfless life.




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Placement: HM; (Nov.2011)

Contest:Than-Bauk

Sponsor:Rick Parise

By:kashinath karmakar

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/26/2011 8:51:00 PM AHA!! I just saw your peeping eyes!! The Indian actress was much easier to spot! You need an Avatar that is more conspicuous, but at least you got this one up now!! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/26/2011 8:49:00 PM waiting for that poem, Kash! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/18/2011 6:21:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 11/17/2011 12:54:00 PM Good to see the (H M) Kash..! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/17/2011 2:17:00 AM Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, kash Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/16/2011 2:20:00 PM Congratulations, Kash. THe message of yours is excellent. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 11/16/2011 1:50:00 PM I see your candle burning off the impurities of life...a wise and noble write. Congrats Kash.....ps...I thot of you as I was eating breakfast today...ha ha. Kashi Cereal...loaded with cranberries and NUTS!!!! ha ha. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/16/2011 1:41:00 PM You have such a spiritual heart, Kash. This is beautiful! Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/13/2011 1:09:00 PM Yes, seeing all those candles can be so moving. Lovely piece, Kash Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 11/13/2011 10:07:00 AM A very creative and beautiful analogue poem... The chimney smoke underlines your thought, God! only you would come up with that words... Dinda :) Login to Reply Dinda Minardi Date: 11/13/2011 10:08:00 AM God!!! This is supposed to be sent on Michael's page... Sorry!!! Terribly sorry... God! I embarrass myself...

Dinda Minardi Date: 11/13/2011 10:04:00 AM This is wonderful, really!!! Like this a lot and the message... Wow, Kash :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/12/2011 9:05:00 PM WOW,,P.D. Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 11/12/2011 5:15:00 PM selfless is on my top word list. Once, I told a friend that he was selfless...he got offended---So I let it ride!:) figured if he thought it meant selfish, he did not deserve an explanation! Hell awaits pranksters like me. Nicer Bauk than most:) Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 11/12/2011 1:36:00 PM Like your Than-Bauk. It is one form I have not tried. Yes, burning the candles at both ends--makes me think of a workaholic. love phyl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/12/2011 12:26:00 PM Kash, this is pretty. I forgot the exact way to do these. I think the last syllable of line one rhymes with first syllable line two? (or maybe third) But I can't remember about line 3. What did you rhyme in line 3? Login to Reply