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"Playing With Fire" The heat of the fireplace enhances the spark, we know our love will not fade in the dark. We kissed amongst burning candlelight, your presence alone brightened my midnight. Nothing can extinguish your warming touch, a lasting impression that meant so much. Bound to be burned As we played with fire, we could not resist and gave in to desire. This kind of scorch I was lucky to find, and neither of us ever seemed to mind. We were both engulfed by passion's flame, and we only have each other to blame. November, 20th, 2013

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Date: 1/27/2015 3:42:00 AM
C'grats Kelly--God bless.>rajat
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/30/2015 1:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Rajat.
Date: 1/25/2015 7:51:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/28/2015 11:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph.
Date: 1/25/2015 12:19:00 AM
KELLY, always pleased to read every entry on any contest list. Congratulations on your HM. Luv ~SKAT~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/28/2015 9:46:00 PM
Thank you for the kind congrats, SKAT :)
Date: 12/20/2013 5:55:00 PM
Engulfing and passionate. Quite the enchanting verse here! Keep up the excellent work! Always, Laura
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/23/2013 10:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. That means a lot coming from you!
Date: 12/15/2013 11:35:00 PM
Kelly Such a romantic and sweet write. I could feel the passion, desire and longing in each line. You poured out your devotion for this special person. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Mystery Man poem. Hugs
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Date: 12/10/2013 6:38:00 AM
A very good poem Kelly, Nice win....Roger
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:10:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Kelly
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Date: 12/9/2013 6:49:00 PM
Congrats, Kelly! Passionate.
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:34:00 PM
Hello Kelly, Thanks for having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win again. xox.LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2013 6:10:00 PM
Love the passion and the fire in this write wonderful my friend. and thanks for your comment on the old fashioned Christmas. enjoyed writting it.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/6/2013 10:57:00 PM
You are very welcome, Cheryl. Thank you so much for the lovely comment, my friend!
Date: 12/3/2013 6:34:00 AM
Good one for the playing with fire theme. loved that last line to sum it up!
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Date: 11/30/2013 7:36:00 PM
The site is full of love poetry tonight, nice one! Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:00:00 PM
Hot Stuff! Love it!
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:00:00 PM
oh my , I love this ! Where have you been mistral ? It is like finding a diamond ! SR
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/27/2013 4:04:00 PM
I have been writing poetry for about ten years, but I never shared them with anyone. I guess I have been in hiding until recently. I have only been on Poetry Soup since August!
Date: 11/25/2013 8:12:00 PM
wonderful poem the fire of passion
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Date: 11/24/2013 12:58:00 PM
you heat this up with amazing flow and a smashing ending at that, kelly... fire away!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/23/2013 7:02:00 PM
Very enjoyable poem and rather enticing.
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Date: 11/22/2013 8:58:00 PM
Wow.. Wow.. Kelly, you sure burned this one up... Oops .. I'm glad I decided to sneak in and give it a small read... Lol, and ended up reading it all... love the flames... LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 5:46:00 PM
How boring life would if be if we always behaved. Show me a line and I'll do my damnedest to untoe (sic) it. I'm assuming this is for Linda's contest. If so, good luck with this strong entry, my friend. I'm rooting for you. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/22/2013 9:18:00 AM
It's good to read your stuff again. This was simple, sensuous, & direct. Awesome! :)
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Date: 11/22/2013 6:48:00 AM
Great write, SP; I especially enjoyed and loved the fourth stanza. If this is for a contest, you definitely have a strong contender here and I hope you win <3
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Date: 11/22/2013 6:24:00 AM
Excellent romantic poem dear Kelly.
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Date: 11/22/2013 5:53:00 AM
Sometimes one does get burned in one way or another..Thanks for the visits to my page..Your comments are always encouraging..Sara
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