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Burlap and Satin

“You’re burlap and satin; you’re leather and lace,” the bride-to-be’s mother said. “He’s a disgrace! Break up with him. It’s not too late to save face. He’s our neighbor’s farmhand. He should know his place.” Her dad said, “He’s not in your league, can’t you see? If you marry, think of how poor you will be. You’ll not get one cent from your mother and me. Go give back that cheap little ring and be free.” The daughter cried, “No, I’ll give you up instead if I must. I know what my grandparents said to you, Dad. They thought you were out of your head to want a rich, pampered girl. ‘Not her,’ they pled. And, Mom, how did Grandma and Grandfather feel when they met my Dad-to-be? Did he appeal to them as a good choice? YOU said they had real concerns. He seemed somewhat rough. So you would steal away to get married. Your choices were right. THAT—they now admit. Though you’re happy and quite successful, as newlyweds you had to fight your folks’ disapproval, and money was tight. We’re burlap and satin—as once were you two! Our future will have a much rosier hue if you bid your coldness—and not US—adieu! We don’t want your money. Your blessing will do!” Date:March 12, 2018 Contest Title: Burlap and Satin Sponsor: Anthony Slausen placed 5th of 10 February 24, 2019, entered in Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon, Mile 21 June 21, 2019, entered in Brian Strand's contest Your Choice (12) Love Verse June 5, 2021 entered in Anthony Biaanco's $ Contest placed 8th (of ten placements)

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Date: 6/19/2021 3:00:00 AM
Wow. Congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/19/2021 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj. Janice
Date: 6/22/2019 10:05:00 AM
Burlap and satin--sounds like my wife and me [of course, I'm burlap]- congrats Janice on a most enjoyable poem!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/22/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thanks so much, LJ. Janice
Date: 4/3/2018 3:09:00 PM
Creative winning contest entry. Many couples start a life together without their parents thinking this is a match made in heaven but some work our and some don't but everyone wants their families' approval. I enjoyed reading this one. Way to go. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2018 5:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! Janice
Date: 4/1/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thought I'd drop by back to say congratulations on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/1/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel! Janice
Date: 3/31/2018 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wonderful dialogue.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/31/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! Janice
Date: 3/31/2018 9:04:00 AM
Congrats Janice!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/31/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Date: 3/31/2018 6:00:00 AM
Wow. Congratulations. I was once rich. No I have remarried. A poor girl. And I am more poor after a divorce. But my now wife and I are so rich and so happy...Many wishes to you and Happy Easter, Kai
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/31/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kai! Happy Easter to you too. Janice
Date: 3/30/2018 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janice, great write! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/30/2018 10:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve. I hope the same for you! Janice
Date: 3/30/2018 7:31:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/30/2018 7:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 3/30/2018 6:46:00 PM
I really like how you wove this inspiring love story using the burlap and satin theme, Janice. Such a well-written, flowing Monorhyme! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/30/2018 7:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice
Date: 3/30/2018 5:39:00 PM
Terrific Janice! I loved the story direction you took with this one! No wonder it made the winner's list! Well deserved!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/30/2018 7:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Carrie! Janice
Date: 3/17/2018 10:20:00 AM
Great stanzas with the enjambment and all, Janice. You know how to do poetry in a story telling fashion! HOpe I can do one as good as this!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/17/2018 1:13:00 PM
WOW! This is very encouraging. Thank you so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 3/13/2018 12:29:00 AM
Another magnificent write from you, Janice. I think most everyone will be able to relate to this one. Very impressive!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/13/2018 12:54:00 AM
Thank you SO much, Daniel. Janice
Date: 3/12/2018 3:28:00 PM
This is fabulous, Janice - I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Your lines flow effortlessly, and you tell a great story. Good luck in the contest!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Agnes! Janice
Date: 3/12/2018 3:03:00 PM
Love that first line, you did this really well, some great lines that flow and rhyme so well.. Nice one Janice..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, S.O! Janice
Date: 3/12/2018 1:49:00 PM
Wow, Janice. Well written. A very charming poem. Well done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
Date: 3/12/2018 12:46:00 PM
This flows beautifully, Janice and I love the full circle message, I really enjoyed xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Date: 3/12/2018 11:45:00 AM
Your message resonates in simple words..well written, Janice..best for a win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 3/12/2018 10:29:00 AM
So true in many ways...Once love was the reason a decision was made...otherwise, it could be as tragic as they said...Nice write indeed...All the best Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/12/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Arturo! Janice

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